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Topic: My Random, Makes no sense Poem D:> |
Gothic_Vampire_Empath
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Views: 5844
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Forum: Poetry Corner Posted: Mon Dec 03, 2007 7:47 pm Subject: My Random, Makes no sense Poem D:> |
I love it! It is original, funky and "out-there". Just reading it made me smile! Keep improving and someone might pay you one day for writing like that! |
Topic: in the dark....i wrote tell me what u think |
Gothic_Vampire_Empath
Replies: 2
Views: 4809
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Forum: Poetry Corner Posted: Mon Dec 03, 2007 7:43 pm Subject: in the dark....i wrote tell me what u think |
Actually, it is quite good. Are you going to add on to it? If you choose not to, it is still a worthy piece! I really enjoy the simpleness of it. If you'd enjoy a blow-by-blow concerning your spelling ... |
Topic: What/who is god? |
Gothic_Vampire_Empath
Replies: 180
Views: 61295
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Forum: Philosophical Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2007 7:42 pm Subject: What/who is god? |
As we commemorate the birth of Jesus Christ two millennia ago, we offer our testimony of the reality of His matchless life and the infinite virtue of His great atoning sacrifice. None other has had so ... |
Topic: make your own poem |
Gothic_Vampire_Empath
Replies: 5
Views: 5565
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Forum: Poetry Corner Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2007 7:09 pm Subject: make your own poem |
What a tantilizing idea. Maybe I can come up with something! |
Topic: Empaths' Original Poetry |
Gothic_Vampire_Empath
Replies: 2
Views: 4806
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Forum: Poetry Corner Posted: Sun Dec 02, 2007 7:05 pm Subject: Empaths' Original Poetry |
Swirling masses all around me, trying to pull me in, black and liquid… make me think it’d be good just to drown. To melt all my troubles and worries away, to not have to worry about another day… ... |
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