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  Topic: Looking for helpful critique(and possibly new readers!)
Tinner1214

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 PostForum: Writing Help   Posted: Wed Apr 01, 2009 6:40 am   Subject: Looking for helpful critique(and possibly new readers!)
You should develop the plot more, I think. Everything is good so far. A nice assasination attempt might liven things up.
 
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