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Topic: original story, by me... need serious help!! |
ashbrook
Replies: 9
Views: 6239
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Forum: Writing Help Posted: Thu Sep 14, 2006 1:32 pm Subject: original story, by me... need serious help!! |
thanks much! even if the story is way under construction... sorry... -___-
brooke  |
Topic: Grammar and Spelling Assistance Offered |
ashbrook
Replies: 27
Views: 29632
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Forum: Writing Help Posted: Sat Jul 22, 2006 4:56 pm Subject: Grammar and Spelling Assistance Offered |
i just wanted to say that i'm sorry!! i didn't realize there was another grammar thread!! i thought i didn't see any! my bad!! i posted that when i was a little too tired to be on the computer, so i a ... |
Topic: find english help here.. |
ashbrook
Replies: 2
Views: 3881
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Forum: Writing Help Posted: Sat Jul 22, 2006 4:53 pm Subject: find english help here.. |
i'm sorry!! i didn't realize there was another one!! i thought i didn't see any! my bad!! i posted that when i was a little too tired to be on the computer, so i apologize. sorry for the mishap...
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Topic: find english help here.. |
ashbrook
Replies: 2
Views: 3881
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Forum: Writing Help Posted: Sat Jul 22, 2006 10:33 am Subject: find english help here.. |
I'm better at giving other people advice than giving myselft advice.. *sigh*
so if anyone needs someone to look over their stories for any reason.. call on me!! i'm better at editing than writing ( ... |
Topic: original story, by me... need serious help!! |
ashbrook
Replies: 9
Views: 6239
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Forum: Writing Help Posted: Mon Jul 17, 2006 4:36 pm Subject: original story, by me... need serious help!! |
i decided to write a prolouge to the story!!
you can find it here: http://www.fanart-central.net/chapter-43672.html
thanks guys!!
oh, and if anyone needs any help w/ editing their stories, i ... |
Topic: Slowly losing the will to live... |
ashbrook
Replies: 14
Views: 4634
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Forum: Life Assistance Posted: Fri Jul 14, 2006 10:28 am Subject: Slowly losing the will to live... |
thanks a lot
it means the world to get advice and support like this.. and i'm actually doing better! it still hurts of course, but it's less painful cuz i know that someday, i will be with the ... |
Topic: Sword of Ages |
ashbrook
Replies: 6
Views: 4429
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Forum: Writing Help Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 5:43 pm Subject: Sword of Ages |
as much as i could read before my eyes started straining.... awesome... the mysteriousness of it is excellent... i'll have to read the rest when you update it!! (i hd the same problem with paragraphs ... |
Topic: Sword of Ages |
ashbrook
Replies: 6
Views: 4429
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Forum: Writing Help Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 5:42 pm Subject: Sword of Ages |
as much as i could read before my eyes started straining.... awesome... the mysteriousness of it is excellent... i'll have to read the rest when you update it!! (i hd the same problem with paragraphs ... |
Topic: Sword of Ages |
ashbrook
Replies: 6
Views: 4429
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Forum: Writing Help Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 5:33 pm Subject: Sword of Ages |
i haven't read it yet.. but the title caught my eye... there's a Sword of Ages in my orginal story.... weird. i'm gonna have to read this now. O_O
brooke |
Topic: original story, by me... need serious help!! |
ashbrook
Replies: 9
Views: 6239
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Forum: Writing Help Posted: Fri Jul 07, 2006 5:28 pm Subject: original story, by me... need serious help!! |
here's the link to the second chapter!! woot!
http://www.fanart-central.net/chapter-42661.html
enjoy!
brooke |
Topic: Slowly losing the will to live... |
ashbrook
Replies: 14
Views: 4634
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Forum: Life Assistance Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 12:53 pm Subject: Slowly losing the will to live... |
just try to relax, stay calm, and if necessary, cry with ice cream. Heck, separate yourself if things get too overwhelming.
that's the best advice i've gotten so far! one of my best friends from ba ... |
Topic: Slowly losing the will to live... |
ashbrook
Replies: 14
Views: 4634
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Forum: Life Assistance Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 12:25 pm Subject: Slowly losing the will to live... |
thank you for the support... i'm actually feeling a lot better about this situation now...! |
Topic: Slowly losing the will to live... |
ashbrook
Replies: 14
Views: 4634
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Forum: Life Assistance Posted: Fri Jun 30, 2006 9:41 am Subject: Slowly losing the will to live... |
thank you! |
Topic: original story, by me... need serious help!! |
ashbrook
Replies: 9
Views: 6239
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Forum: Writing Help Posted: Thu Jun 29, 2006 10:12 pm Subject: original story, by me... need serious help!! |
thank you... thank you!!! i've been working on the second chapter for a while... i probably post it soon.. it goes a bit deeper into what the world is like and stuff... and i'm so happy to hear that i ... |
Topic: original story, by me... need serious help!! |
ashbrook
Replies: 9
Views: 6239
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Forum: Writing Help Posted: Tue Jun 27, 2006 10:15 pm Subject: original story, by me... need serious help!! |
well... this is the first chapter to a story that's been developing itself for the past year... any suggestions for sentence structure, conflict, resolution, plot... etc... would be extremely apprecia ... |
Topic: Slowly losing the will to live... |
ashbrook
Replies: 14
Views: 4634
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Forum: Life Assistance Posted: Mon Jun 26, 2006 11:44 am Subject: Slowly losing the will to live... |
thank you... i guess i just don't want to move on... that's my problem |
Topic: The End Is Near! |
ashbrook
Replies: 47
Views: 12546
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Forum: Philosophical Posted: Mon Jun 26, 2006 1:31 am Subject: The End Is Near! |
the world will end one way or another... that's all there is to it...
and i super agree with the WW3 theory... if that be the case... nukes will be the death of us all... our very protection become ... |
Topic: Half Empty? Half Full? |
ashbrook
Replies: 11
Views: 4212
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Forum: Philosophical Posted: Mon Jun 26, 2006 1:18 am Subject: Half Empty? Half Full? |
this is the most common question : half empty/half full?
people can argue and argue about this... it all depends.. say you pour a glass of water and drink half of it... the glass is half empty... b ... |
Topic: Labeling... |
ashbrook
Replies: 63
Views: 19358
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Forum: Philosophical Posted: Mon Jun 26, 2006 1:01 am Subject: Labeling... |
at times i think labels are just a way to make the labeler feel better... i know i used to do it all the time...
as for the goth thing... my sister calls me goth because my favorite color is black ... |
Topic: I scared of coming COMPLETELY out of my shell.... |
ashbrook
Replies: 16
Views: 5351
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Forum: Life Assistance Posted: Mon Jun 26, 2006 12:14 am Subject: Re: I scared of coming COMPLETELY out of my shell.... |
I've become a little more self-conscious. Less confident about my love for art... I'm afraid people will think I'm weird; like no one will accept me... Whenever I show my mom or dad a picture I drew, ... |
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