Yami No Matsuei Fanfic

[silver_dreams]

yay.. i just need to edit this chapter and i'm done with it!@ huzzah.....

it's weird.. you'd think my writing would get worse when i'm half asleep, but it's the opposite.. weirdness..

[Eliza_Hime]

YAtta!!!! Woa.. you have been editing the fic for the whole day now... you must be exhausted... *pats pats* 3 chaps per day.. oh my... :ph34r:

[Eliza_Hime]

I want to read..~~ *turns into a puppy with big sparklings eyes* So excited~~

[silver_dreams]

i wrote 2 of the chaps myself.. the other nearly completly by myself.

it's nothing :P

here is the next chappie..


Chapter 3- Who knew?

Hisoka and liquor is not a good combination. Tsuzuki had learned it that first time when Hisoka had passed out after drinking half a glass, but somehow he found himself with a quite drunk Hisoka hanging off of his arm in a definitely not Hisoka-like manner. Not that the older shinigami cared much, mind you.

So there they were, Tsuzuki half-dragging his drunken partner to his own house, Hisoka's being far in the opposite direction. What a sight they were.

Tsu Hisoka crooned, all rationality lost to liquor. Tsuzuki tried his best to ignore him, unable to help but feel a bit of dj vu. He had just been doing the same thing to his partner this morning.

Fumbling to keep his partner from stumbling sideways into a shrub, the lilac-eyed shinigami dug in his pocket for his house keys, nearly falling over himself as he changed their position, carrying Hisoka bridal-style*.

They were just barely in the room before Hisoka leaned into Tsuzuki, effectively knocking both of them down onto the soft carpeting. Tsuzuki had no time to react, any words he may have managed to stutter out were cut off as Hisoka all-but-gently pressed his lips against the older mans, hands already working to pull off the black jacket he always wore.

Who would have known liquor made Hisoka so insane?

Before Tsuzukis spinning head could register the fact that this was Hisoka doing this to him, his shirt was already off, Hisoka's slightly smaller hands flitting across the older mans chest. Another moment and the hands were frantically working at the clasp of Tsuzukis pants.

Using his larger size as an advantage, Tsuzuki easily flipped them over, leaning over Hisoka. One hand easily held the younger boys wrists above his head, registering him motionless. One handedly, he dug in the drawer of a nearby table until he found what he was looking for-- a pair of handcuffs. He quickly snapped them on Hisoka's wrists, glimmering purple eyes staring down into unfocused jade for the second time today.

Who knew the day would turn out so good?

Hisoka's face was flushed, his piercing green eyes pleading for Tsuzuki to continue, though fogged with pleasure and wine. He had lost his jacket somewhere, wearing nothing but the orange shirt, which hung loosely off his shoulders and his usual pants, though his silent look seemed to plead for Tsuzuki to remove them. Arms pinned above his head, looking completely defenseless, he lay on the floor, no trace of fear in his expression at all. Pure lust.

A bit hesitant as he wondered whether he was hurting his partner, Tsuzuki kissed Hisoka deeply again, their tongues battling for supremacy. They separated, Hisoka gasping for air, Tsuzuki kissing his way down to the nape of Hisoka's next, giving a sharp nip every so often just to make Hisoka moan.

Sliding one hand under the orange shirt, Tsuzuki straightened up enough to look Hisoka in the eye.

Are you gonna kill me for this when youre sober and have a major hangover tomorrow? He asked, not wanting to have to deal with a grumpy Hisoka in the morning.

No. Came the one-word reply.

Promise? A tentative question

f**k me. An uncharacteristic response.

No! Shocked.

Why not? Slurring the words.

Youre drunk! Justification of reason.

So? A stupid question.

Youre drunk. A stupid answer.

So? Not giving up.

Youre drunk. Not giving up either.

Oh Realization.

Reluctantly, Tsuzuki pulled himself off of Hisoka, un-shackling him and stowing the handcuffs back in the draw for possible future use.

Hisoka sat up, groggily.

What about when Im not drunk?

Hm? Was Tsuzukis reply as he re-buttoned his shirt.

When Im not drunk. Then would you..? The question didnt need finishing.

If you wont kill me. Tsuzuki answered in a joking manner.

Ok.

Huh?

I wont kill you for it.

Silence filled the room. An hour later, if someone were to walk into the room, they would find Tsuzuki sprawled on the couch, Hisoka cuddling into him, TV still shining softly in the darkness.

Who would have known?

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(Ha-ha youll have to wait for the lemon I am so evil >) )

*= i couldn't resist :lol:

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Stats:

Pages: 3
Words: 694
Paragraphs: 37
Lines: 100
Time: 1 hour.

[Eliza_Hime]

Awwwwww... I thought there'll be lemons in this chap... *sulks*

Anyway.. this is GOOD! I like it!!! Weeeee~ Hmm.. Tsuzuki, where the heck did you get that handcuff and for what??

[silver_dreams]

[quote="Eliza_Hime (Liza)"] Awwwwww... I thought there'll be lemons in this chap... *sulks*

Anyway.. this is GOOD! I like it!!! Weeeee~ Hmm.. Tsuzuki, where the heck did you get that handcuff and for what?? [/quote]
where DID he get the handcuffs? i wonder..

yeah, thsi chap was gonna be a lemon, but decided agianst it. keep the fangirls guessing so they keep reading.

[Eliza_Hime]

Uwwaaaa... Can't wait for the lemons... *bites Kumagoro's ear*

Hee..hee.. sneaky sneaky Tsuzuki, very smart, eh?

[silver_dreams]

lol ^_______________^

bondage can be entertaining.

*falls over asleep*

i'll try and write at least two more chapters tomorrow..

[Eliza_Hime]

Okay~ Will be waiting for your wonderful fic~ ^-^=

Bondage & NCS can be MORE exciting...
Nya ha ha ha >

[Willy]

*has just finished reading the 2 chapters* 0.0...whoa....that is intense stuff man....handcuffs, slutty Hi-chan, where do you get this stuff!? Lol. I'm giving my fanfic to you officially now. You're doing a much better job then I am!

And in the 2nd chappie, I bet I was the girl who said "I wonder if they'll start making out at the table!" It's typical me ^_^

[silver_dreams]

^.^

it's a collaboration fic, so both of us get credit. i have a problem sometimes with coming up with ideas, but i can write detail really well.

so like, you can write a rough draft of the chapters, and i edit them and finish them?

it would work good!

and if you look at the waitresses dialouge, you can notice one or two things Eliza_HIme would say too ;)



Where do i come up with this stuff? no idea...

[Eliza_Hime]

Yup.. sure you two got the credits!!! Well done~~ ^-^=

Can't wait to read the lemon scenes.... NYa ha ha ha ha >
Go Tsu~ GO for it!!! Hi-chan will/will not KILL U...

[Willy]

[i]Wouldnt it be awesome if they started making out right there at the table?![/i]

^That is sooo me!

But anyways, the way the fic is going is totally different then mine but that's a good thing! I love it and I want you to have it as a continuation for your other story. My present to you! Besides, i'll think up of something else, or make another poem/song. And another thing, I dug up my last year's editor things and I got inspired again. Heheheh.

[silver_dreams]

[quote="Willy (Wioletta)"] But anyways, the way the fic is going is totally different then mine but that's a good thing! I love it and I want you to have it as a continuation for your other story. My present to you! Besides, i'll think up of something else, or make another poem/song. And another thing, I dug up my last year's editor things and I got inspired again. Heheheh. [/quote]
ne, it is easier if we both worked on it together because if i don't have someone to help, i'll often give up on whatever i'm writing. : (

[Willy]

Well how about this....I could give ideas and edit?

[silver_dreams]

[quote="Willy (Wioletta)"] Well how about this....I could give ideas and edit? [/quote]
that sounds like a good idea.

if you help with ideas, i will write the chap, then you can edit it to make sure it makes sense.

my writing can get confusing, because i write at a very advanced level, and i'm trying to learn japanese and spanish at the same time right now ( X_x)

[Willy]

okay! yay! *huggles Silver*

[silver_dreams]

[quote="Willy (Wioletta)"] okay! yay! *huggles Silver* [/quote]
^.^

what should we call the fic though?

and, it is going to be a two-part thing, ne? in the first fic they get engaged, in the second they get married, right?

[Willy]

I have no clue....lol and we really should stick to one board because i'm getting so confused.

[silver_dreams]

it is that much confusion?

i don't notice.;.. but then again am used to it.

when it was jsut me and Eliza_hime chatting, we would be back and forth between the YnM and Gravi threads like crazy ^________________________________^



need to think up fic name... hmmmmm