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Stratadrake
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[quote]Stupid stuff like this. I'll just add descriptions of what the characters are doing before their dialogue. That'll tell you who is talking and little tidbits of their mindsets.[/quote]
Gestures and facial expressions are not stupid stuff, to the contrary they are a very effective way to help [i]show[/i] a character's current mood -- especially for the supporting characters, because we don't get to see their thought processes like we do with the main character.
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TomtheMighty
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True, enough.
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TomtheMighty
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| All righty, I have posted the first chapter at Fanfiction.net. If anyone would like to proof read my second chapter, please send me an email or reply here! Thanks. |
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