The Silver Revalation

[SailorMars]

(This is a story based on a role playing game...the only characture I own in this story are Sailor Heart...Din..& Gary)

In a Dark room a tall woman with red hair hold up in a pony tail and was wearing a white lab coat was in a dark laboratory with a man with silver hair and dark clothes in a lab tube filled with water there were wires and pipes in him Now lets bring him to life Said the Woman she pulled a switch and electricity was flown through the equipment and hit the tube. it shocked the man inside then seconds later he opened his eyes and with a blast of dark energy he broke the container he was in and some of the machinery the woman walked over to the man Welcome backmaster she said the man just smiled


Chapter 1
[b] The begining[/b]

It was a cool summer after noon and two girls were flying in the clear blue sky Hey Amy where are we going? asked a girl with long blond hair, blue eyes and a baby blue shirt and grass green pants with sneakers. Were heading over to Gohans house Katie replied the girl with black-grey hair holed up by a bow, violet eye, a red and white fighting suit and red high-heal shoes. Cool where do they live Katie asked
"He lives in West City...It will take 30mins to get there" Amy replied Katie just smiled and said Okay! then they flew off. Thirty minutes later they landed outside a quaint house in the outskirts of west city "Gohan! You here?" Amy asked then from out of the house stood a teenage boy with short spiky hair sticking up, with a white shirt and black pants Oh! Hey there, Amy! What's up? he said then "Hey Gohan! she said. Then Gohan notices Katie Who's your friend? he asked Katie didnt say a thing Oh this is Katie! Katie this is Gohan!" she introduced them Hello, Katie, nice to meet you. Gohan said but Katie moves closer to Amy Okay.... he said Amy bended down to Katies height Katie its o.k.Gohan is one of the sweeties, nicest, guy Ive ever known. He wouldnt even kill a fly! Amy explained. Aw, come on! I'm the one who killed Cell, remember? he said then he laughed.

Who's Cell? Katie asked Gohan gave Amy a looked that said "Explain him to her!!!" but then Amy gave him a look that said Shell get more fricken scared of you!!! Gohan backed away from Amy then said So.....what are you girls here for?? Katie just kept her silence "Well we were bored so.......I wanted to see what you were up too!" Amy replied Well, I was about to teach my little brother how to fly...you wanna help me? Gohan suggested "Sure!" Amy said Come on, Goten! Your training awaits!! Gohan yelled into the house Kay!! a v small voice replied then a small boy with waterfall spiky hair and wearing and orange jump suit ran outside. He looked at his brother then at Katie a faint blush appeared on his face and her smiles at her Hi... he said. Katie smiled as well Hi. "Hey Goten!" Amy said Oh! Hi, Amy! Hey...are you and my brother going out anytime soon? Goten asked her
Gohans Face went completely red G-Goten!!! he said. Katie giggled at the sighed of this. Amy was blushing a little Goten was laughing at the way they looked You two MUST like each other, cause both of your faces are RED!! Katie was also laughing Sorry about that, Amy.... Gohan apologize in a low voice

"It's okay...." she whisper to Gohan then she smirk "Oh then you and Katie must like each other too! Cause I saw you Blush when you saw her Goten!" Goten face was flushed with redness. Katie was just smiling and Gohan was smiling hugely She got you there, little bro! Amy snickered "Never mess with me!" Gohan scratched his head Heheven I should know that! he said. Amy smiled at him "You should! Causes remember in Elementary! Did you see how many guys I beat up?" she asked him HehYeahThe poor, poor souls... then Gohan laughed "Well they deserved it! They called me a Girly-Girl!" Amy said Gohan snickered Girly-girl... then he quickly covers his mouth ......... Amys Right eye twitched "YOUR DEAD GOHAN!!!!!" she talked Gohan to the ground. AHHHHHHH!!!! he said as he got tackled by Amy; he soon pins her to the ground and starts to tickle her* AHA! Gotcha! Goten and Katie watched them. Amy was laughing uncontrollably "NO...STOP...IT...GOHAN!!!!" Then Gohan finally stops and helped her up, he gave her a smile Well, at least I got ya out of your grumpy stage! he said "True" she said. Gohan poked her Admit it; I'm the only one who makes you laugh!
"Yes! Your the only one who can make me laugh, Oh Great Gohan!" Amy pretends to bow Oh, stopyou're just being sarcastic right now... said Gohan "Hehehe" Amy chuckled Yeah, laugh now, I'll get you back when you least expects it! Gohan said Can we start training now? Goten asked Katie just laughed at all of this "O00O! I'm shaking in my Pants Gohan!" Amy said then turned to Goten "Alright!" Gohan glared at her just you wait.... He thinks. "Come on; let's go to the training fieldsaway from the house. He carries Goten on his back and Katie hops onto Amy's back Hey, Amy...I was thinking...wanna get together and watch a movie later on? he asked her "Ok." She replied.

Then Gohan notices that Goten was looking at them um...we'll go to your houseI'll bring over a couple of movies...you can choose which one ya wanna see...and umI don't know if my mom will watch both Katie and Goten or not... he said "Ok.." she said again, then they took of into to the sky and disappeared. They soon land outside of the forest, where there are no houses around for miles Well, ya ready, little bro? Gohan asked Yeah!! Goten said What about you, Amy? Gohan asked her "Aye, Aye Captain!" Amy said Gohan glared at Amy when she said that....Don't call me that....or I'll call you that name you hate he said teasingly what was it again?? "NO! Gohan if you call me that I swear I will kill you!" She said threatening. Gohan holded up his hands, as if surrendering or something Okay, okay, I won't!! he said. Amy sighed "Thank you!" she said Gohan smiles at Amy then turns to Katie UmKatie? You don't mind waiting a few minutes, do you?
Katie shakes her head no then sits a few feet away from them Okay, let's begin....Goten? Hey, are you listening?! Gohan asked him. Goten was staring at Katie then shacked his head huh? Oh! Yeah! I'm listening! Goten said Amy snickered.

Goten glared at Amy Why are you snickering?! You're in love with my brother!! he said Gohan face went red again. Amy was blushes super crimson Gohan noticed Amy's blush Are you okay?? He asked her Amy nodded her head very fast. Gohan leaned closer to her... his face was inches from hers Are ya sure?? he asked Amy just nodded Whats he doing?! she wondered Gohan stand back up, and smiling innocently Just making sure!! he said. Amy sighed in relief Gohan looked at her suspiciously What'd ya think I was goanna do? he asked her. Goten just Laughed I bet she thought you were goanna KISS her!! he said Amy was Blushing "No!" she Waved hands in front "Never!" she said Katie smirked Heh...Amy, don't try to hide it! I can tell you have feelings for Gohan!! she said Goten Oooohhh at this and Gohans Face turns crimson ... Amy was blushes crimson also "S-So! I know you and Goten have a thing for each other!" she said Gotens face was a beat red ....... he growled
Katies face was red as well ............. Gohan just laughed at this "HA!" Amy said, but then Katies eyes glow red ....No....it...can't...be..... she said Gohan and Goten were a little confused.
"Katie..." said Amy Katie fell to her knees, weakly, tears streaming down her face My Parents...they've been killed.... she said WHAT?! said Gohan "NINE??!!" Amy said. Hehe killed them.... Katie said in a shaky voice "Who?!" Amy asked her Katie shakes her head I-I don't know his name...he's tall...has...has shoulder-length black hair...pale blue eye....almost in-human... she explained Gohan growled I know who you're talking about... he said in an angry voice. Then Amy realizes who it is "Damn you..." she said Huh? You fought 17 before, too, Amy?? Gohan asked her. Amy nodded "He attacked me over in North City..." WHAT?! He didn't hurt you, did he?? He asked her "He did, but nothing to series.." Amy said. Gohan was growling in anger I'm so goanna kill him! Katie was watching them the entire time..... While Goten went to play with the butterflies. Amy Put one of her hands on his shoulder "Gohan its ok...You don't need to kill him...If he hurt me badly I wouldn't be here." She said trying to calm him down. Gohan faintly blush Huh? Ok...Are you sure? He asked again just to make sure "Yeah" she replied

Gohan smiled Well, the kids are now bored...why don't we watch those movies? "Alright!" Amy agreed I'll meet you at your house, okay? The Goten got onto his backpack and took off. What is 17 planes this time and can these two stop him stay tuned

To be continued

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[SailorMars]

Yeah...I hope other people will look at this

[SailorMars]

Kay heres chapter two

[b]Chapter 2[/b]


He flew off and dropped Goten off and takes out some movies from inside the house I'll let her decide. Goten, you'll be okay here?? He asked him I wanna be with Katie!! Goten replied Gohan sighed Fine...come on... Meanwhile back in the forest "Katie come on! Get on my back!" Amy said Katie gets on her backOkay She said. Then Amy took off and went back to there house Gohan then began to fly to Amy's house till Matte!! Gohan!! I have to go to the bathroom!! Goten said Gohan growled and makes a u-turn Why didn't you go before we left the house?! He asked him Well...I didn't have to go then, but now I do! He said. Meanwhile back at Amys house *Sighs* Katie do you want something to eat be fore Gohan comes?" Amy asked her Katie beamed happily Yeah! I'm hungry! she said "Alright what do you want?" Amy asked her. Katie looked around Do you have any Rigatoni? She asked "Yeah" she said That's what I want! Katie said happily "Alright, Well help yourself." Amy said putting some Rigatoni on the table and Katie began to eat. Meanwhile Gohan waited for Goten to finish .... I'm done!! Goten said running out Well, come on! Gohan said Goten jumped on his brothers back and he flew offagain

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Twenty minutes later Gohan and Goten landed in front of Amys house he knocks on the door Amy?? just then the door opens and Amy was standing there "Hey Gohan!" she said Hey, Amy! I brought over some of the movies that I like...you can choose which one ya wanna watch... Gohan said handing her some movies. She looked at cases saying there names "Ghost Ship; Freddy Vs. Jason; Scream; and John Carpenter's: Vampires" Goten went over to Katie Hey, Katie! After you eat, do you wanna go play outside and leave the grownups watch their movies? he asked her. She nodded Sure! "How about we watch 'Freddy VS Jason'?" Amy asked Okay.... the Gohan smiled at her teasingly Sure you can handle it?? "Oh, the question is Can You handle it?" she asked him. Gohan blinked twice then laughed laughs Of course I can handle it! he said them popped in the movie and sits down on the couch*
Amy sat down next to Gohanand that was Goten and Katies signal to leavethey went outside and played in the back yard. After a few minutes of watching the movie, Gohan puts his arm around Amy's shoulder .... Of course Amy knew what Gohan did but she didn't mind
Gohan pulled her closer to him You're not scared yet, are you? he asked Amy smiled "No"

Then Gohan gave her a quick kiss on the forehead Just wondering... he said Amy blushed a little as well. Gohan smiled at her blushed face ... Amy looked up at him "W-What?!" Gohan had sweatdrops Oh, nothing! Nothing, why? he said trying to cover up "Your lying Gohan! Tell me!" Amy demanded. Gohans face went red It's really nothing!! Amy got closer to him "Tell me! I won't laugh or anything!" she said. Then his face turns crimson at how close she was Umwell...I-I've always had a crush on you for some time now... Amy was shocked at what he said "You have?" Gohan blushed Yeah... he admitted "Well I...Uh also had a Crush on you too Gohan" she said blushing. Gohan looked at her Really? "Y-Yeah..." She said. Then Gohan gave her a kiss and she gave some back to her


Meanwhile in the outskirts of town inside a temple two girls dressed in school fugi outfits were taking care of a princess with short blue hair and white angle wings who was lying on a bed Is she going to be alright Eternity? asked a girl with long dark hair, purple, and a black and purple suit Yes DShe just needs to rest Replied a girl with long hair put up in short pig tails silver eyes and a white and silver different suit. Just then a girl enter the room; a young girl with pink hair held up in another different pigtail wearing a school fugi ran over to the princess and another girl with yellow pigtails a magenta sweater and black pants stood at the door way Is she o.k.? the girl asked Dont worry RiniSerenity just needs to rest and she be fine when she wakes up Eternity replied. Then a light purple cat with a crescent mark on its forehead jumped onto the bed Well lets just make sure that soon a dark sailor scout might attack her the cat said "Dont worry Diana the sailor scouts of darkness wont harm her" Sailor D said By the way Serena where are Katie and Amy? Sailor Eternity asked her I think they went over to the Sons place I swear Amy and Gohan are just as worse as you were with Darien Sailor D replied Well lets just hope that the dark scout doesnt catch them Eternity suggested Or that android 18..we dont want to have anymore innocent people killed Serena said Yeah Sailor D said but unaware that the dark scout Sailor Heart herd ever every word they saidwithout a minute to spare she disappeared out o the room without a trace she went outside and deformed she was now a teenage girl with black short hair with two long strains on front of her face , and dark clothes named Diana " Well better get going" she started to run outafter a while she stopped "O.k. it official I have no Idea where I am...." she took out a key chain she rubbed her thumb on the orb...then the keychain turned into a staff..."Alright...show me where I am..." the orb began to glow a bright light and it blinded her and the scenery she was in

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Just then the princess that was lying in bed deformed and turned into a girl with a white shirt and jeans and her wings disappeared named Yume Princessyour awake Sailor D said. But she just got up and went out the door Princess Eternity asked her. But she just kept walking out, the girls just looked at eachother and shrugged. When the princess was outside she sighed and began to sing You were once my one companion, you were all that mattered. You were once a friend and father, then my world was shattered

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The staff turns back into a key chain and she slips it back into her pocket..."Hmm....Goku huh...so there actually someone stronger then the Princess ...I think I'll pay this guy a little visit.." she took out a scroll...and put it close to her face, then she threw it into the air; grabbed a dagger and stabbed it scroll then she disappeared... She repapered in front of Amys Hut. She tooked out a small pebble and threw it on the ground...smoke covered her and when it cleared her hair was a icy blue and she was wearing a red shirt and navy blue pants..."Now to find out who Goku is..."

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Back in the house Gohan holed Amy closer to him, and Amy put her arms around his neck he leaned into her hug ....

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She knocked on the doorthen she took out a dagger and slit some places of her body, and finally stabbed her self in the shoulder..."Now to get rid of the weapon.." she wiped the blood off and threw the dagger into a small pond and burned the cloth...then she collapsed. Just then Yume senses someone hurt and teleports to where Diana was and see's her on the floor Oh my! she said then she tooked out the Silver Imperial Crystal. A light flashes and half her health gets transferred into the girl. Yume then fainted out of weakness. Diana stirred a bit then opened her eyes, above her was a girl..."Huh whowho are you" she asked just then the woman faded away"Wait!!" but it was too late she was gone..."Who was that she said as she looked up into the sky. She rubbed her head..."What's wrong with me....why can't I remember anything?" she got up and felt a sharp pain in her arm..."ahhh!!, what...what happened to my arm?" she wondered

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Yume on the other hand woke up in the temple Why...why am I here again? Where is that girl? then she blacked outthen she woke up and a dark place with no light what so ever Tsuyosa........ she said. Her eyes narrow Tsuyosa! Bringer of Strength! Help me get through life's tough battles! Then from out of the darkness a woman with black hair name Naraku came out Did you think Tsuyosa really existed? she asked her If Tsuyosa didn't, then how did I get through my parents' death? Yume asked her All an your own. Naraku said then disappeared into the darkness All these years.....thinking he existed....


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Gohan and Amy didnt hear the noise from outside but he pulls away when he heard giggling Those brats... Gohan said "Oh, God..." Amy said. Goten ducked down and he pulled Katie down with him I think they heard us.... Gohan began making noises from the room so the kids can hear Chuu, chuu, chuu, haa, haa, haa Goten and Katie were screaming Ahhh! Amy snickered. The kids run all the way back to Gohan's house but they didnt se Diana who went behind the house looking for the girl that disappeared. Amy and Gohan watched them run. Gohan laughed at this So, now what do you wanna do? Amy shrugged "What do you wanna do?" she asked him Hey!! I asked YOU first!! He said "HEY! Well I asked you 2nd!" She said. Gohan growled at her.... *Grins*She herd voices from the back of the house she walked around the side and peered over...there were a black-spiky hair boy and a girl..."Who are those guys..." she ask herselfNow that Sailor Heart has found the son of Goku and his new found girlfriend will she get rid of them before going in for the big killand what happened to Yumestay tuned

[b]To be continued[/b]

[silver_dreams]

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*sigh* Silver strikes again. she's right though...

[silver_dreams]

of course i am. i've been here for around 10 f**king months now; i know the freaking rules. <_<

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[SilentSoul92]

edit: just ignore this one, I messed up.

[silver_dreams]

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[SilentSoul92]

oops, I'll go edit it.