Irish For Life

yuyuhakusho1992 · My First Post! Joined: 13 Mar 2005 Posts: 1

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This is a Yu Yu Hakusho story about a girl would is Jin's sister but... they dont no it and soon fall in love yet there is more that love this girl Yoko comes out somtimes and greets her and Hiei is not as mean to her as he is the group but He just thinks of her as a friend nothing more. She was at the dark tornament but she never watched her brother fight she doesn'y even no about him. She is Irish and has baby sky blue eye's and long red hair with pointy ears and her power is the wind she mostly wears a silver/white kimono that goes up to her knees and she wears white shoes that help her run faster,Her name is Kin and Her mother and father she does not no they are said to have been killed and when she left the dark tornament she went to a small but nice city and lived in the woods she is wanted at spiret world for braking into the valt so she hides so they cant find her, somtimes in the forest when she is resting on a tree she will hear someone in her head and she talks to him but he is stubbern and when he doesn't want to talk he just says Hn but she doesn't mind much she likes to talk to him because she never talks to people she has not seen him before but she suspects that he is a demon because they talk threw there Minds. She has seen something fly past her that was a black blur and she thinks that the blur could be the man. Sha watches the teenagers and couples walk threw the park and she has seen the spiret detective before she no's that his name is Yusuke Urameshi and he works for Koenma, King Enma's Only son, the ruler of spirit world.
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Kin sat in a tree watch the couples in the park thinking to herself how nasty these humans where they dont care about anything but themselves and there stuped human friend's and lovers heh i have nothing aganst then but they act so..so... different from demons... how come they are free when we arnt, as she thought to herself she felt a presens of her friend that she talks to and she shuted her eye's and smiled and snickerd to herself as she said to him "hello what brings you to this neck of the woods?" the voice slightly chuckled and said "Hn. i can go where i want when i want" she smiled to herself and said to him in her head "so why dont you come and show me what you look like or your name?" the voice was quiet and then he said "Hn" and she could tell he wouldn't anwser because whenever she asked he would leave but the she saw a man with black spiked up hair that the gravity must be holding up on its own his hair had a white strip going up and down he had a white bandge on his forhead and it was giving off some kind of demon energy his eye's where shut as he slowly walked he had a black cloke on him with a white shaw over it on his shoulders he had black shoes and a white bandge rappd around his right arm that was also giving off so demon energy.He slowly walked over to under the tree you where sitting in as Kin eyed him suspishisly as he stoped right under the tree and soon dissapered and re apeard right infront of Kin and opened his eye's and said Hn. Kin blinked noing that voice as she smiled to herself now seeing who she was talking to all along it has only been 2 week's as she looked at him his eyes caught hers as she looked into them and it was as if she was in a trance this man had the most beautiful Crimsen blood red eye's she she had ever seen, she blinked afew times as she scaned his body energy and his sent. He smelt like he was a fire demon but then again there was that little sent of a ice demon in him to it was mixed up into one, he was also very strong about as strong as an A or S class demon and the demon energy he was giving off right at that moment was a great deal of energy by itself. She then senced somthing very odd but it was not him the sent was a Kitsune or in other words a fox demon then she heared a soft human voice with a small hint of demon in it, it said just as she turned her head "Hiei what are you doing here and who is she and why does she have the sent of a Mo-zoku (demon)" Kin blinked as the man named Hiei hned and said giving this man a death glare "Hn you ruined my fun" with that said the Koorime jumped down from the tree onto the ground walking past the man into the forest the man looked up at Kin in the tree he had long fiery red hair with beautiful green eye's he had a light redish pink school shirt on with the same colored pants and brown shoes he smiled at Kin and said "Hello its nice to meet you my name is Suiigi but you can call me Kurama" Kin blinked as she looked at him, he had a deep voice and he had just said he was Kurama, She then stood up and jumped down infront of him not touching the ground because she was flying with the wind but she was inches away from it as she looked at him and asked "could you be Kurama... Yoko Kurama?" he smiled and noded to Kin's question and asked "And would are you a wind Mo-zoku? may i have your name?" she smiled and noded and said "Hello my name's Kin i am a wind Mo-zoku from Maki" Kurama smiled and took his hand out of his pocket and put it infront of the girl and said "It is a pleasure to meat you Kin" the girl blinked a bit and said "im so sorry but..well i dont use human body lauguage" he smiled and took his hand down and bowed as the girl bowed back.

new one's will be out sooner or latter.. -.-;; but you can e-mail me and tell me whacha think at yuyuhakusho1992@yahoo.com thanks and i have story quizes at www.quizilla.com at this screen name ---> yuyuhakusho1992 bye for now

Stratadrake · Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2005 9:57 pm Post subject:

Please do not simply post fanfiction in a thread expecting us to read it. It's better to upload it to your FAC account (or wherever else), and provide a link to it from there. Plus, it avoids confusion as which parts of your post are the fanfic and which are not.

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