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[Stratadrake]

Ah, welcome. It seems you missed reading the little memo at the top of this section. Gotta warn you, it ain't just for show ;)

Firstly, please do not copy and paste fanfiction in the body of your post. It's far better practice to upload it to your FAC account and provide a link/URL to it from here.

Second, you have to close your bb code tags when you're done using them, or else they won't work. When in doubt, just hit the "close all tags" link.

Finally, [b]why[/b] are you posting this for us to see? Do you just want us to read it and let come what may? Stuff like that would belong in the Self-Promotion section (a subcategory within the General Art Discussion area).

Or do you need some serious critiques and help with writing this story? If so then you should use the Fanfiction Critiques subforum in this area. Gotta warn you, the Critiques subforum has specific rules and regs to follow so make sure you read the info thread in there to learn what they are.

So other than that, four very common newbie mistakes as it is, welcome aboard FAC and the forums.
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