Read A Screenplay.

[theWriter]

The transfer from my home computer to the FAC didn't go as well as I had planned, and now the layout is just a little on the screwy side. However, I worked hard on this and if you ignore the basic screenwriting errors, and read the text and tell me how I did, I'd be really happy.

Have any questions about the layout, just ask as well.

Thank you.

Secret
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[Dark_AngelXX]

It was very interesting ^_^ The tension built rather slowly, but I suppose it helped with the dramatic meaningful ending.
Yeah, there are a few script writing errors which I can see. I'm no script writing pro myself (Too be honest, I've only written one screenplay, but, not to sound at all boastful, my English teacher said I had future potential ^^. If you want, I can send you my screenplay so you can get a vague idea on how the layout should be Just PM me.
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[theWriter]

Sure. I have a general idea of the layout, in fact, I began to get better after I wrote this one, but beforehand all I had done was look at movie scripts and just try to mimic what I saw. It was only after I submitted it to a contest that I realized my boo-boos.

So yeah, go ahead. I'd like to see the script.
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[Dark_AngelXX]

Ok, if you use msn just add me on dark_angel3100@hotmail.com and I'll send you the file over ^_^
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