I Want A Rating On My Fic

WanderingKitsune · Newb Joined: 30 May 2004 Posts: 6

yeah.. It's got eight chapters..... and it's orginal but it's baised on anime.. as is all of my work... and charries...so are my piccys but i do not have a scanner yet... I want a rating on them pretty please?

please,

http://fanartcentral.net/stories.php?sid=3...=3725&chapter=1

Thanks

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Celtic_Guardian_Gurl · Very bored Joined: 31 Dec 1969 Posts: 124

My compy won't let me reply in the actual story T.T I only read the first chapter, but it looks fairly well written. I feel sorry for the kid who doesn't like girls ;_; (can't remember his name >.>). Poor kid, getting in trouble for liking other guys...

WanderingKitsune · Newb Joined: 30 May 2004 Posts: 6

thanks.. it's not even doen yet.. and it's already got eight chapters... yeah.. he gets in trouble for it.. and his father beats in in the second chapter, thank you.

^^;

it gets kinda sad in the eigth chappie.. please keep reading.

Mouse-chan · Very bored Joined: 08 Feb 2004 Posts: 120

Um, it looked like it was written pretty well, but you lost my interest when the conversation started after the first paragraph. And I'm not partial to gays, so that pretty much ruined it for me... um, well...