Down A Rabbit Hole

VincentValentine13 · Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2006 6:32 pm Post subject:

Yes, this is another Vincent fic....so sorry Writer, but I know how much you hate me using that name....most of the fics though aren't original, if that makes you feel better about it....I can't help his name.

Anyway, I really hope you guys like this one! Vincent follows a white rabbit into Wonderland, or at least American McGee's Wonderland, and so you can imagine his reaction. I hope you people like it and help me with lots and lots of critiques!

Down the Rabbit Hole and What Vincent Found There
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Astri · Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 4:58 am Post subject:

Hmm...very interesting. Mildly disturbing and with a few spelling errors, but very interesting. Had somebody presented me with that fanfiction and said, "Read this, it's a fanfic of Vincent Valentine in Wonderland," I probably would have backed away slowly and run, but I actually liked it. It was quite interesting.

I'm not sure I can really critique any of it except for the spelling errors. It seemed quite good to me ~.^
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Merlinhamill · Member Joined: 07 May 2006 Posts: 47

No indeed, there is little to critique, aside from the ad that was meant as an and. Very detailed I must say, and not to a fault either, a feat not easily accomplished. Well done. =)

VincentValentine13 · Posted: Mon May 22, 2006 4:12 am Post subject: Many Thanks...

Thank you very much! I appreciate that you read it. I am also glad to see that there is nothing really wrong with it! I have another one, with an OC if you're interested! Wink