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PostPosted: Wed Sep 06, 2006 5:05 pm    Post subject: Elementals Reply with quote

[b]Chapter 1[/b]

"Mizuki...Mizuki class is over." whispered a voice from behind. "Huh...?" Mizuki opened her eyes slowly and lifted her head off her desk. 'Another dream...' she thought as she got up tiredly and started to pack up. She yawned as she rubbed her eyes. "You okay Mizuki?" asked a voice from behind. Mizuki turned around to find her best friend, Nakuru standing there with a bit of a worried look on her face. Mizuki gave her friend a reassuring smile and said "No, Im fine, just a bit tired I guess." she said with another yawn. "Did you get any sleep last night, or were you up late again?" Nakuru said with a teasing smile. "Well, I was early this morning, wasn't I?" asked Mizuki. "Yup, you werent late, which is unusual for you" said Nakuru, giggling a bit. "Whatever." said Mizuki, stretching. "Did you have another one of those weird dreams?" her friend asked. Mizuki nodded as she lifted her backpack and flung it on her back. "What was it about this time?" Nakuru asked. "Well...I saw the shadowed figure again, and some people fighting it. But...the people fighting it, I couldn't make out what they looked like." said Mizuki, remembering her dream. Nakuru sighed as she looked ahead. "You been having those dreams a lot lately, what do they mean?" she asked, looking back at Mizuki. "I don't know, maybe something important is going to happen." said Nakuru, shrugging. "Then how come you having dreams of it, if something important is going to happen?" Mizuki looked to her best friend, and could tell that she wasnt the only one having the dreams. "Nakuru...you have the dream too, don't you?" she asked. "Well, not dreams. Once in a while, I will space off, and have the daydream. A bit weird though." confessed Nakuru. "Yeah, I know what you mean." "Well, tomorrow Saturday, what'cha want to do now?" asked Naoko. "Well... Mizuki thought for a bit, and looked up at the sky. A purple, whatever-it-was coming towards them. "What is that?" asked Mizuki. "Wait a minute... the two friends said at the same time. I saw that in my dream..." The Purple rock landed right in front of them. A bunch of white light beams shot out, and went in all different directions, but two floated towards Mizuki and Nakuru. Mizuki and Nakuru looked at each other, then held out their hand cautiously and grabbed the floating objects. The light disappeared, and an amulet was in their hands. One, the one Mizuki had, was a circle with a silver wave in it. The other, the one Nakuru had, was a dark purple amulet with a moon in the middle. The two gazed at the amulets for a while, before looking at each other in confusion. "Did you..?" started Nakuru, but Mizuki cut her off. "Yeah, the exact same amulet in my dream, what bout you?" said Mizuki. "Yeah, same here." said Nakuru. "So, what should we do?" "Well, put them on, I guess..." suggested Mizuki as she lifted the amulet in the air, and put it around her neck. Are you sure?" asked Nakuru. "I'm not sure, but I have a feeling something important is going to happen, so just put it on" said Mizuki, and Nakuru cautiously put it on. Both amulets started to glow, and then stopped. "If anything happens, Mizuki, Im blaming you." said Nakuru. "You said to put them on." "Well, you didn't have to listen to me." said Mizuki, laughing a bit. "Besides, there amulets. What could go wrong?"
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 06, 2006 7:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

SilverMoon, please don't post your fanfics directly into threads here. Post them in your FAC gallery, then post LINKS to them here in the Critiques section. If somebody comments on your story in the middle of your posting of it here, then it interrupts the reading for anyone else who looks at it.

Long story short, please stop posting up entire fanfics here. Post links, and people will be more than happy to read and critique them.
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 07, 2006 4:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="Astri"]SilverMoon, please don't post your fanfics directly into threads here. Post them in your FAC gallery, then post LINKS to them here in the Critiques section. If somebody comments on your story in the middle of your posting of it here, then it interrupts the reading for anyone else who looks at it.

Long story short, please stop posting up entire fanfics here. Post links, and people will be more than happy to read and critique them.[/quote]

Thanks for the tip.
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