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SirTyler48 How can I get a custom title thing?
Joined: 07 Jul 2006 Posts: 852
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 2:17 pm Post subject: Preview of the begining of my book. |
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http://www.fanart-central.net/story-43122.html
I want some critiques. I want to make sure it is ok, and if there is any way to improve it. This is just the preview of the first 20 pages. |
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SilverKitsune Elder Than Dirt
Joined: 31 Jan 2004 Posts: 5898 Location: whittier, CA, Los Angels
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 6:55 pm Post subject: |
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It's ok. It just needs to be double spaced and have quotations added, perhaps a bit of rewording as well. _________________ [img]http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a131/I_Lov_Asian_Men/phoenixsig.jpg[/img]
[b]xAmiDarkfieldx wrote:
"Your a bird, I'm a cat of the jungle. Birds can't get pregnant last I checked. They lay eggs."[/b] |
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SirTyler48 How can I get a custom title thing?
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Posted: Sun Feb 04, 2007 6:59 pm Post subject: |
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Aye aye, capn'. |
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