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thnaks for commenting on my firs post so please comment on 2

 
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Lionhearts
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 11:00 pm    Post subject: thnaks for commenting on my firs post so please comment on 2 Reply with quote

There used to be
Times that I was happy
With you by my side
Your warm breath
On my cheek

Maybe my memories
Deceived me
For now life
Is the opposite
Of what it was

Now longer will
I be with you
In the rain
The only place
I ever wanted to be
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leprecaun12
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PostPosted: Fri May 04, 2007 2:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

thats awesome!if this were rating i would give you a 10/1
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