Märchen

Ryokou · Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 3:58 pm Post subject: Märchen

Märchen means "fairy tale" in German. Just so ya know. I made up a poem about it based off of MAR/Märchen Awakens Romance (the manga/anime).

[u]Märchen[/u]

The place of my dreams
Is where I want to be
Somewhere else
Someplace new
Where the rain brings happiness
And washes away sorrow
A different world
That only I can see
A place where time
Is just an illusion
Reality, a puzzle with no answer
Death, a piece torn from
The picture of life
A place of peaceful forests
Serene skies and
Calm oceans
Something that was impossible
Was there all along
Because you couldn’t see
Because you didn’t believe
A world full only of
Happy memories, never to be forgotten
Everything is as I imagined
But there’s something missing
What could it be?
Who could it be?
It’s You!
Now, everything is perfect
In this place
That you and I
Create

Tell me what you think! I think I abused the "return" button...lol.

DemonRaven · Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 7:02 am Post subject:

Good poem.

Ryokou · Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 9:03 am Post subject:

Thank you. ^^

DemonRaven · Posted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 10:40 am Post subject:

Your welcome.^^

Alexis_Hoheimer · Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 2:30 am Post subject:

awesome
it sounds like its talking about ppl who want to escape to a place far from reality
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Ryokou · Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2007 12:13 pm Post subject:

Mhmm. It's supposed to. Ginta the main character in the anime/manga is a dorky boy who is weak with no stamina. XD He wants to be the hero and escape to the 'other world', MAR Heaven! And etc... XD Ginta gain strength and is not weak in MAR, and saves MAR, which he could probably never do in his own world in a billion years. Hahaha.