Need help with Detailing story x.x

FFCKirara · Newb Joined: 18 Jul 2005 Posts: 3 Location: FL

Hi, I am about to post up the first chapter of one of my stories, so can people help me detail, grammar, and spell check it please. It would be very helpful. As of late, I haven't been able to do much because of writers block x.x so help would very great. Thanks. Mad

Stratadrake · Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 6:06 pm Post subject:

If you want a critique, please provide a link to your story text and a brief summary about the piece as a whole, do not simply copy & paste the actual story into a post.
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