Naruto's Dream: One Year of Training

rffraff05 · Newb Joined: 04 Aug 2007 Posts: 3

Story is one my gallery at the main site, if you want to check it out, plz bump the violence content up to medium. so may people fall into that trap.
oh and comments are much apprciated here, as well as on the story

nextguardian · Very bored Joined: 05 Feb 2006 Posts: 121

This is a great read, check it out Naruto fans!

FluffysPrincess2968 · Posted: Fri Nov 23, 2007 8:59 am Post subject:

Yeah, Rff is an awesome writer! I've read it through 2 times (even though it isn't finished yet) and I still love it!
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Trinity_Fire · Forum Stalker Joined: 31 Dec 1969 Posts: 1042

http://forums.fanart-central.net/viewtopic.php?t=26408
Good job. Read this a little more carefully next time. This is a section for fanfiction critiques, not show and tell. Go there if you want people to read your story. For those that commented; that's not how you critique, btw.
Post your story here only if you have a sincere need to improve your writing and are looking for help.
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