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rainbowfox16 Member
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Posted: Fri Oct 19, 2007 6:00 pm Post subject: My Poetry... |
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[u]A Haiku About the Moon and Stars[/u]
I can see the moon
I can see the sparkling stars
I know they are true
I decided to make my first poem a short one. Haiku short of course! _________________ If at first you don't succeed, consol yourself with a beer. |
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rainbowfox16 Member
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Posted: Sun Oct 21, 2007 9:30 pm Post subject: |
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[u][i]Not So Silent Night[/i][/u]
In the night
I hear them yell
I feel my painfully beating heart
I'm in hell
Can no one see?
The pain, the sorrow?
Why can't he
be quiet until tomorrow
When I'll be gone
And he'll be there
He'll be alone
My momma will be with me, here.
She's crying and he yells
No one hears them but me.
The little ones, cannot feel
The screaming voices, like me... _________________ If at first you don't succeed, consol yourself with a beer. |
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zukate08 Very bored
Joined: 01 Apr 2006 Posts: 219 Location: Philippines
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Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2007 3:43 am Post subject: |
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Agh shoot... Your second poem just made my heart melt.. I love it ^^ _________________ Jake: Are you a Pokemon?
Ruby: No.. Why?
Jake: Because I choose you.
Ruby: lawl... XD
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Ivan: Teach, what's an 'outreach'?
Teacher: It's about helping people who are unfortunate.
Ivan: Oh.. So you mean we're going at Maxie's house? >Hugs Max<
Max: @_@ |
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rainbowfox16 Member
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Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2007 5:12 am Post subject: |
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((thanks for that, sometime people think what i write isn't real, but it's based on my real life. I appreciate the comment))
[i][u]Dedicated To My Dearest Mojo: 2001-2004[/u][/i]
I feel the sorrow, the loss of one
so dear to my heart.
He could not talk, he liked to play
but on the morning he went away.
He didn't see, that silly baby
Oh how I miss him, my sweet Mojo.
I raised him from birth, when his mother died
and now he's gone, from my side.
His black body and white spotted chest and toe
I'll always remember and cherish so.
He'll be in heaven, when I arrive.
Of that I'm sure, and makes me alive. _________________ If at first you don't succeed, consol yourself with a beer. |
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rainbowfox16 Member
Joined: 28 Aug 2007 Posts: 58 Location: erm....I'm not sure....
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Posted: Sat Oct 27, 2007 8:11 pm Post subject: |
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[u][i]Love and Rage[/i][/u]
My rage is an infinate chasm
And no one can fathom
The steps I'll take
To get revenge, make no mistake
My love is a private water way
Only certain ones are allowed to stay
I share it sparingly
If my trust is betrayed, I'll show no mercy. _________________ If at first you don't succeed, consol yourself with a beer. |
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rainbowfox16 Member
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Posted: Mon Nov 05, 2007 5:24 pm Post subject: |
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[[i]u]Misunderstanding[/u][/i]
Rage I cannot comprehend
The understanding that I've done wrong,
but know not what I've done...
Can't I show my love, in a way
that doesn't hurt those close to me?
I'm sorry for their pain,
but what about me?
I cannot see clearly,
and neither can they.
Out emotions are so different,
and yet, we feel the same.
Rage and pain.... _________________ If at first you don't succeed, consol yourself with a beer. |
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rainbowfox16 Member
Joined: 28 Aug 2007 Posts: 58 Location: erm....I'm not sure....
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Posted: Sat Nov 10, 2007 12:27 am Post subject: |
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[u]A Quick Nonsense Poem At Two AM[/u]
Sleep deprived and wishing
I could lay my head down
If only for a minute
that would calm my mind
Now I lay my head in my hands
and I wonder....
If peaches were pie
Which would be rye?
Or if camels were dogs
what about a hog?
Maybe if cats were mice
they wouldn't be rats.
I wonder about
the most ridiculous things
then I realize
I'm dreaming!!
((yeah...I was awake at two am and decided to type what i thought...this is what happened.)) _________________ If at first you don't succeed, consol yourself with a beer. |
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rainbowfox16 Member
Joined: 28 Aug 2007 Posts: 58 Location: erm....I'm not sure....
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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 12:00 pm Post subject: Unclear Emotions |
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I cannot see, what I am meant to be
My mind isn't clear, and yet to me it is dear
To me and mine, I am not kind.
I wish to know, how do I grow?
Grow from this pain, wishing no gain.
No gain, other than to escape the pain.
Lost in my mind, why can't they be kind?
I know I am whining, but they are signing,
Signing my death note, the one I wrote..... _________________ If at first you don't succeed, consol yourself with a beer. |
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