Please critique my Phantom of the Opera drawing please

PhantomSpiderpig · Newb Joined: 11 Oct 2007 Posts: 8

I did a drawing of Erik from Phantom of the Opera with with watercolors. ... here's the link:
http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-653592.html

please critique, what you think of it

auron6658 · Member Joined: 12 Oct 2005 Posts: 65 Location: College

It is much better than any watercolor I could do, but at first glance the nose and mouth seem to be a bit out of proportion.
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HarraArial · Very bored Joined: 29 Jan 2008 Posts: 183

The first thing that flew out of my mouth: "Awww! That's so cuuuute!" I love your work with the watercolours, they're fantastic, and for out lovable Erik, I'd say you captured him quite nicely.

The only thing I can find wrong is the hand in the air looks a little wonky, but otherwise, amazing!

theviking · Rookie Joined: 28 Jan 2008 Posts: 32

Nice, and no anime of manga hooraa for that.
The nose and the eye's are a bit off but woth some shading you can fix that.