make your own poem

GuardianKat · Newb Joined: 28 Oct 2007 Posts: 4 Location: Michigan

I have made a contest where we make our own poems based on our favorite things At the nights toll A man walks in a stroll A man whose name you see is the name called Johnny.C

TheWolfsFang · Forum Scalleywag Joined: 26 Nov 2007 Posts: 991

First of all, you need to submit your Poems in poetic fashion. For example, instead of "At the nights toll A man walks in a stroll A man whose name you see is the name called Johnny.C", you would write like so:

At the nights toll
A man walks in a stroll
A man whose name you see
Is the name called Johnny.C

Secound of all, I'm pretty sure you could get away with putting this in the 'Contests' area. That is were this should be.

And last, if your going to be writer, even one of Poetry, learn to use your grammar skills.

Gothic_Vampire_Empath · Newb Joined: 03 Jun 2005 Posts: 5

What a tantilizing idea. Maybe I can come up with something!

unloved_poet · Posted: Wed Dec 05, 2007 3:41 pm Post subject:

Easy!

Through the Night
You weep
You weep for me
You weep for life
And I fail to see
Your true Light
You weep for my niavety
For my stupidity
I hurt you
You hurt me
You said sorry
And I still fail to see
The Light
You brought to me

Holy shizzles!! I Just wrote that shiz on the spot...........and it sucks.......shit.
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TheWolfsFang · Forum Scalleywag Joined: 26 Nov 2007 Posts: 991

*sigh*

Right Now
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Right now,
There is war
And no peace,
To be found
Anywhere.

Right now,
Aids is killing
Thousands of us,
And there is no cure,
Anywhere.

Right now,
The Ice caps
Are melting, and
No-one can do anything about it,
Anywhere.

Right now,
Some-one’s taking
Control of another person’s
Life and no-one will do anything about it,
Anywhere.

But…

Right now,
You could do something,
You could help some-one,
And it might not affect the World,
But it will affect everyone who sees it,

And isn’t that all we can do, Right now?

There, I contributed.
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Invader_Zen · Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 5:01 pm Post subject:

Mii...it sounds like fun!!

Wish~

You could change fate,
Wish,
you had a clean slate,
Wish
your pain could dissipate,

Dream,
You could actually fly
Dream,
You don't really want to die,
Dream,
Then you wouldn't have to cry.

Dead
Are your hopes
Dead
Are your wishes
Dead
Is every dream you ever had

Stolen
Wish
Granted
Clean
Slate
Fate
Planted

That was fun, yeah!
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