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CoStanleyQueen5 Newb

Joined: 27 Sep 2006 Posts: 8 Location: Under your bed
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Posted: Wed Mar 19, 2008 5:42 am Post subject: Messed-up story bodies! |
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I've noticed that a lot of my chapter bodies have recently been heavily compacted! Here's an example:
Sasuke - Sasuke Sasu - Me (BIG difference from Sasuke!) Kat - SasukeAndMomijiHaHa A list of people in the room; Sasuke Kat, Gaara, Kisa, Sakura, Neji, Sasu, Kyo, Yuki, Momiji, Rock Lee, Iruka, Kakashi, Shino, Hinata, Zabuza, Haku, Batman. It was 1:00 in the morning at the holy temple of moo (situated in a place I am not at liberty to tell you). And it was raining really hard. Really, REALLY hard. Braineh walked in, half asleep, and tripped over Sasu, who was sleeping on top of Gaara, using his stomach as a pillow. Gaara was reading a shojo manga (remember he can't sleep!), and trying not to notice the fact that he had a mad fangirl draped over him. She had turned out impossible to move. Sasu was holding onto Kat, who was using Sasuke's stomach as a pillow. Braineh managed to fall at just the right angle to crash onto Sasuke, Kat, Gaara, Kisa, Sakura, Neji, Sasu, Kyo, Yuki, Momiji, Rock Lee, Iruka, Kakashi, Shino, Hinata, Zabuza, Haku and Batman all at once (I don't know why Batman was there, I don't get paid enough for that), and Sasu ripped the book from Gaara's hands and threw it at the robot boy's head. It hit him square in the face and knocked him back onto Kat, squashing her flat 'Oh yeah,' he thought, 'it's Sasu's sleepover...'. When Momiji FINALLY managed to peel her off the floor and blow her back into shape with a bicycle pump, everyone was wiiiiiiiide awake, so they decided to play something. Momiji spoke up "Hey! I know this game! You spin a bottle twice, and whichever two people it lands on have to kiss! IT'LL BE FUN NYEH!!!" Sakura looked at Sasuke and squealed herself blue in the face. Sasuke looked sick. "Okay!" Kat yelled, and promptly drank an entire bottle of Coke, so they had a spinny thing. They all pushed the furniture aside and sat in a circle on the floor. Sasu spun the bottle. It landed on Gaara. Gaara spun the bottle again. It landed on... Neji. The two boys looked at each other, positively green in the face, and stayed that way until Sasu and Kat pushed them into the kiss. After five minutes of holding them in the kiss, they were let go, and immediately ran off to the bathroom, to rinse their mouths out with soap. They came back slightly calmer. The bottle spun... and landed on Yuki. Then it landed on... Kisa. Kisa blushed so much Kyo was worried her head might explode. Yuki paled. "Isn't this like, illiegal? Kissing someone who's not even 13 yet?" "I'm writing this fic!" Sasu yelled. "Of course it's not illiegal!" So Yuki kissed Kisa. Then Hiro appeared out of nowhere and punched Yuki. "Did you know that was gonna happen?!" Yuki asked Sasu. "Heh heh heh... maaaaaaaaybe..." The next pair was Kat and Kyo. They kissed shyly, then Lee shoved Kyo out the way, screaming, "KAT IS MINE DATTEBAYO!!!!!!!" Then he punched Kyo so hard he flew to the far end of the garden. Kyo came back a few minutes later, rubbing his head, soaking wet (it was still raining hard). The next pair was Kakashi and Iruka (I couldn't resist!). They were quick to get into a passionate kiss, that lasted until Momiji shoved a badger between them, and everyone else pulled them forcefully apart. Sasuke had already fainted at the sight, and Batman had to spend the next fifteen minutes fanning him before he came round. Sasu was sitting on Kakashi's chest indian-style. "Sensei, that was completely disgusting and mentally scarring!" Kakashi laughed. "You should read Make Out Paradise." Sasu ran away to spin the bottle again. It landed on her... and Braineh. TWO SECONDS LATER Braineh was lying on the floor, his head bleeding and his arm ripped off again (See 'Legacy' X3). Sasu was hiding behind Sasuke, who was holding a bloody kunai in his hand, his arm around the authoress (X3 I couldn't resist writing that). "No-one kisses my Sasu-chan! NO-ONE!" "HEY! Who're ya calling YOUR Sasu-chan?!" Sasuke kissed her. TWO SECONDS LATER Sasuke was lying on the floor on top of Braineh, his head bleeding and his headband stuffed into his mouth. A FEW MORE SECONDS LATER Momiji was still hyper, despite it being about 6 hours past his bedtime. "I KNOW, I KNOW! Let's do TRUTH OR DARE!!!!!" Everyone was yawning, not allowed to keel over and go to sleep again by order of the little hyper rabbit. "Oooo-kaaaay....." Momiji spun the bottle, it landed on Kat. "KAT-CHAN!!!!! TRUTH OR DARE?!?!?!?!?!" "Ehh... Truth..." Momiji thought. "Ooooookaaaaaaaaaaaaay...... Do you..... FANCY SASUKE?!" Kat giggled. "...YES!" She squealed as Sasuke looked daggers at her. Momiji grinned. "Okayyyy dattebayo. Next...." He spun the bottle again, and it landed on Gaara. "YOUR TURN!!!!! TRUTH OR DARE?!?!?!?! Braineh can choose the outcome 'cause he has pretty hair!"
This was originally typed in seperate lines and paragraphs, and stayed that way until recently. I have tried editing it but it won't change.
Can anyone tell me what's happening, and if it's fixable? _________________ Watakushi ha shin no utsukushisa ga suki desu no! |
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Stratadrake Elder Than Dirt

Joined: 05 May 2004 Posts: 13721 Location: Moo
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Posted: Wed Mar 19, 2008 8:52 am Post subject: |
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There are many issues related to written submissions, but for all of them we need to know one very minor, trivial detail:
Did you submit this as araw text (using the Java or bbCode forms) or as a text file? And if you submitted it as a text file, what type of file was it? _________________ Strata here: [url=http://www.nanowrimo.org/eng/user/242293]Nanowrimo[/url] - [url=www.fanart-central.net/user-Stratadrake.php]FAC[/url] - [url=http://stratadrake.deviantart.com]dA[/url] - [url=www.furaffinity.net/user/Stratadrake/]FA[/url]
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CoStanleyQueen5 Newb

Joined: 27 Sep 2006 Posts: 8 Location: Under your bed
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Posted: Wed Mar 19, 2008 8:58 am Post subject: |
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[quote="Stratadrake"]Did you submit this as araw text (using the Java or bbCode forms) or as a text file? And if you submitted it as a text file, what type of file was it?[/quote]
I submitted it as a raw text using the Java form. _________________ Watakushi ha shin no utsukushisa ga suki desu no! |
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Sora121 Developer

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 2591 Location: I'm here some place
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Posted: Thu Mar 20, 2008 7:58 pm Post subject: |
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The Java editor on the site now has a few bugs. I've been working them out but it hasn't been updated for some time.
To fix this, use the BBcode form.
Terribly sorry for the inconvenience, It should be fixed soon. |
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