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gamefox120
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 7:52 am    Post subject: How did I do on this one? Reply with quote

I need to know what you think about this picture
it could help me out since drawing airplanes are extremely difficult

http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-669346.html
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Jedi
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 10:41 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The drawing itself looks fine, but you need to practise light and shadow techniques. For example, the distant green plane, in the full view image: the bottom half should be darker, while the top half should be darker one side, fading into light- use the same coloured pencil. It's like that on the others as well.
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Axeclick
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 21, 2008 2:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I actually liked it. I think you did fine, just that your coloring is a bit messy, thats all. Shading is a factor, though, it's cartoony, so I don't think it's yet nessasary.
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 21, 2008 10:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Its probably okay. I think the way the figure looks riding the plane is a bit odd. Like they're flat.
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