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angelskip43 Very bored
Joined: 16 Feb 2008 Posts: 208 Location: nc
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Posted: Fri Mar 28, 2008 5:43 pm Post subject: something's "off" |
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i dont know how bad they need to be fixed, or if i'm just being too picky.....
this one the arms are weird, i dont know anything about anatomy: http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-674443.html
i think its the eyes and stuff: http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-674874.html
please redline if they're that bad _________________ [img]http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn313/mikomiko321/Orangelove2.jpg[/img]
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bishielover75 Forum Stalker
Joined: 20 Jun 2006 Posts: 1114 Location: the land of kawaii things
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Posted: Fri Mar 28, 2008 6:33 pm Post subject: |
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The first one isn't so bad. The arms are very stylized, but acceptable. But try to define the elbows a little more, especially in the arm closest to us. Defining the elbow and shoulder area will help enhance the perspective so it looks more, well, arm-like.
I'll make a redline of the 2nd one's face later, because it needs it. >_> _________________ [b][url=http://fanart-central.net/user-Touzoku-joou.php]My Gallery[/url][/b]. For the love of all that is good and holy, stop thinking my bishielover gallery is real. |
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Posted: Fri Mar 28, 2008 7:06 pm Post subject: |
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[img]http://i28.tinypic.com/9q9pfr.jpg[/img]
Also, if her hair is supposed to be straight across when she's upright, then it shouldn't still be straight when she bends forward. _________________ [i][size=9]Go Yankees![/size][/i] |
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angelskip43 Very bored
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Posted: Sat Mar 29, 2008 5:06 am Post subject: |
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ah ok thanks _________________ [img]http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn313/mikomiko321/Orangelove2.jpg[/img]
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