Transformers: Stopping the War

KisaShika · Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 6:48 pm Post subject: Transformers: Stopping the War

I would love some friendly critiques on my most recent Fiction.

- Title: Stopping the War
- URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4059460/1/Stopping_the_war
- Series: G1 Transformers
- Pairing? ThunderCrackerxOC
- Summary: For millions of years the Autobots and Decepticons have fought endless battles and a member from each side is finally tired of them; so they decide to do something about it. ~ThunderCrackerxOC and sides of others~
- Advisories: Not any ratings on it yet.

PhoenixWrightFangirl · Rookie Joined: 04 Feb 2008 Posts: 33

Considering a person and a robot naturally conceiving is the impossible, I would think something could be done like gene splicing, or a baby based off humanized robots mixed with the Transformer type robot parts. I think it would require manual labor to construct it.

Otherwise, the fanfic looks good! I noticed some minor typos, so you may want to spell check it and re-upload it with the corrections, seeing as it's pretty easy to do that on fanfiction.net. I look forward to seeing the rest of it!