Halp....before I screw it up further

[Battou]

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Any help would be appriecialted, most particularily in the clothing. Reference material can be ptovided upon request. Don't worry about the feet, I give up on those I'll just obstruct them some how later during coloring.

Sorry about image quality, At work, had to use the digicam.....
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[Jedi]

Unless she's laying on a table or a sofa, then the arm that's dangling should be at her side instead, with the fingers pointing to her side, or else splayed on the surface- possibly like she's clawing at something. Her face looks fine, but I should bring her right arm round, placing her hand on her stomach or chest area, otherwise it looks too stiff.

Right foot needs to be flat on the surface, otherwise it looks kinda awkward as it is now. The left leg should either be crossed over the right upper leg, or else place flat on the surface in a more relaxed pose.

Hope you don't see my views to harshly, and I hope you attempt some of what I said. Oh, and please put shading underneath her in the final piece, or else put her on a table or sofa.

You didn't screw it up... your proportions are tons better'n mine at any rate, so... good luck on it.
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[Battou]

[quote="Jedi"]Unless she's laying on a table or a sofa, then the arm that's dangling should be at her side instead, with the fingers pointing to her side, or else splayed on the surface- possibly like she's clawing at something. Her face looks fine, but I should bring her right arm round, placing her hand on her stomach or chest area, otherwise it looks too stiff.

Right foot needs to be flat on the surface, otherwise it looks kinda awkward as it is now. The left leg should either be crossed over the right upper leg, or else place flat on the surface in a more relaxed pose.

Hope you don't see my views to harshly, and I hope you attempt some of what I said. Oh, and please put shading underneath her in the final piece, or else put her on a table or sofa.

You didn't screw it up... your proportions are tons better'n mine at any rate, so... good luck on it.[/quote]

This is my OS-tan intended for a DT WP and yes her arm is hanging, I'll prolly have her resting on the windows logo, My original thought was to have her feet on the side of the moniter but...I can't draw feet to save me life and I dunno If I can pull off those shoes. I'm not sure yet what I'm going to proper her further most arm up on but, I'll think of something.
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Would have posted sooner, but tons of underaged relatives in house recently.
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