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Attack this Pikachu!

 
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MiyaKome
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 02, 2008 4:09 pm    Post subject: Attack this Pikachu! Reply with quote

I'd like to know what you all think, be it positive or not.

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Jedi
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 03, 2008 9:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

How you've done Pikachu looks nice, but there are too many curvy lines about the scene. Pikachu has control over lightning. Lightning is more straight and kinda jagged, methinks. The curly lines don't make much sense to me. Also, make the lightning more brighter in the centre. That's all I can offer, even if it sounds kinda weird.
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setzaroth
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 09, 2008 7:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thats pretty cool...but yea a little less curvey electricity would make it better.
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