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JazKitty Newb
Joined: 25 Jun 2008 Posts: 3
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Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2008 8:47 am Post subject: Renji needs a background |
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Just thought I'd throw this out there and see if anyone had any interesting background ideas. Comments on the illustration as it is are helpful too. Thx =^-^=
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London Moderator
Joined: 23 Mar 2006 Posts: 6474
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Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2008 9:43 am Post subject: |
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Dunno about the background, but the palm on his right hand is too short, and his face is oddly triangular shaped. It looks like a piece of his jaw is missing. _________________ [i][size=9]Go Yankees![/size][/i] |
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Jedi Forum Stalker
Joined: 27 Jun 2007 Posts: 1072 Location: West Sussex, England
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Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2008 10:09 am Post subject: |
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How's about a shrine theme? Like, there could be some steps leading up to one of them Japanese shrines slightly in the distance? Perhaps he be protecting a ghost from a Hollow? Just a thought.
Oh and I agree with London about the jaw- it doesn't look full enough to me. Needs to come down a bit more, less angular. Is Renji from the actual Bleach series, then? I'm kinda new to it, see. _________________ The Force will be with you... always. |
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London Moderator
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Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2008 10:34 am Post subject: |
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Renji is from Bleach. _________________ [i][size=9]Go Yankees![/size][/i] |
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JazKitty Newb
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Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2008 4:33 pm Post subject: |
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hey-thx guys! I played w/his jaw a lot actually and this way looked the most Renji-ish to me, he does have a rather angular face and I don't usually draw like that, but I'll play some more.
You're right about his hand, don't know how I missed that. thx! |
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Jedi Forum Stalker
Joined: 27 Jun 2007 Posts: 1072 Location: West Sussex, England
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Posted: Sat Oct 11, 2008 10:12 am Post subject: |
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[quote="London"]Renji is from Bleach.[/quote]
Thanks. Which manga volume does he appear in, or was he created for the anime version.
JazKitty: you're welcome. About the jaw- I just never seen that character before, that's all. If you're happy with it, that's fine, but I can't see nothing wrong with either hand. _________________ The Force will be with you... always. |
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JazKitty Newb
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Posted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 12:59 pm Post subject: |
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Actually I fixed his jaw a little...prob. no one would notice the diff. but me..lol. so I won't repost it.
Renji shows up at the end of vol. 6 but you don't get to know him until vol. 11. He's definitely one of my fav. characters! |
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