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JazKitty
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 10, 2008 8:47 am    Post subject: Renji needs a background Reply with quote

Just thought I'd throw this out there and see if anyone had any interesting background ideas. Comments on the illustration as it is are helpful too. Thx =^-^=

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 10, 2008 9:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dunno about the background, but the palm on his right hand is too short, and his face is oddly triangular shaped. It looks like a piece of his jaw is missing.
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 10, 2008 10:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

How's about a shrine theme? Like, there could be some steps leading up to one of them Japanese shrines slightly in the distance? Perhaps he be protecting a ghost from a Hollow? Just a thought.

Oh and I agree with London about the jaw- it doesn't look full enough to me. Needs to come down a bit more, less angular. Is Renji from the actual Bleach series, then? I'm kinda new to it, see.
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 10, 2008 10:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Renji is from Bleach.
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 10, 2008 4:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

hey-thx guys! I played w/his jaw a lot actually and this way looked the most Renji-ish to me, he does have a rather angular face and I don't usually draw like that, but I'll play some more.
You're right about his hand, don't know how I missed that. thx!
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 11, 2008 10:12 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="London"]Renji is from Bleach.[/quote]

Thanks. Which manga volume does he appear in, or was he created for the anime version.

JazKitty: you're welcome. About the jaw- I just never seen that character before, that's all. If you're happy with it, that's fine, but I can't see nothing wrong with either hand.
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 12:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Actually I fixed his jaw a little...prob. no one would notice the diff. but me..lol. so I won't repost it.

Renji shows up at the end of vol. 6 but you don't get to know him until vol. 11. He's definitely one of my fav. characters!
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