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wandakff
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PostPosted: Sun May 24, 2009 3:27 pm    Post subject: need critic Reply with quote

I have only just begun drawing so I need some guidance and opinion of my work please. Thanks

http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-752736.html
http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-752737.html
http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-747186.html
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andycb2000
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PostPosted: Sun May 24, 2009 6:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

these are very nice!
i would recommend practicing on different kinds of faces
try sketching different lip shapes and sizes or eyes of different ethnicities
many of these faces have a similar look to them
as for the face shape (particularly the chins), try sketching heads in the context of the neck and complete, not cut off
that way, you may have better continuity with the head shape

overall, an excellent start
you have very good artistic skills
and i really likes the shading, particularly around the nose
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wandakff
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PostPosted: Mon May 25, 2009 3:20 am    Post subject: thank you Reply with quote

andycb2000 wrote:
these are very nice!
i would recommend practicing on different kinds of faces
try sketching different lip shapes and sizes or eyes of different ethnicities
many of these faces have a similar look to them
as for the face shape (particularly the chins), try sketching heads in the context of the neck and complete, not cut off
that way, you may have better continuity with the head shape

overall, an excellent start
you have very good artistic skills
and i really likes the shading, particularly around the nose


thank you very much. I greatly appreciate your comments. I too had begun to notice that all of the faces looked similar.
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