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wandakff
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 29, 2009 4:16 am    Post subject: Critics needed Reply with quote

I need critique of my work. shading and proportion are always a problem for me. thanks!

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bowiegranap
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 29, 2009 7:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

When drawing heads, draw them without hair first. Drawing hair straight into a head without first paying attention to how the skull curves results in a very chopped-off appearance, like someone took a machete and lobbed off the drawing's scalps.

parallel lines and vanishing points. Your third picture looks very off without them. The door is open, fine, but if it is open, how come the picture in the door is perpendicular to the viewer nstead of equally slanted like the door?
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wandakff
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 29, 2009 10:13 am    Post subject: thanks! Reply with quote

didn't even notice the door issue! Thanks.
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