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hakutheblindedsoul
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 03, 2009 1:12 am    Post subject: What Do I Need Help With? Reply with quote

Meh, okay. Yeah. Lately, I haven't been feeling satisfied with my work. I don't know if it's low self esteem, OCD, etc, etc, but I really want to improve. But I can't do that when all the comments that I get are "Cool!" or "OMG, awesome" or "XD I lurvs that character!!1!!"

Catch my drift? So if any of you kind peeps could check my gallery out and give some general opinions about it, that'd be great. If you want to pic a certain piece and critique it, that's fine with me as well...

As for the gallery, you know where to click...
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mangakid
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 5:24 pm    Post subject: My Critique Reply with quote

Okay, I am going to Critique this picture in your gallery...

http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-757620.html

First off, all those white dots look unnatural. I think it would look better if you hadn't done that. I also think you should take off that logo it seems you didn't draw that part but I may be wrong.. Another thing, those red Lines under her eyes, are they always there on that character or did you just add them? If you added those, that doesn't look right either. Everything else seems to look okay.
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hakutheblindedsoul
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 6:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

First of all, thank you for taking the time to critique my drawings! I really appreciate it!

Yeah, I can see what you mean about the white dots. I had just gotten this new white out pen and I think I got a little carried away... Rolling Eyes

As for the logo...Well, I do believe I put a disclaimer, but, again, I see what you mean. Now I gotta track down the non-merged version of the pic...

As for the red lines-Attempting a subtle blush with markers=FAIL! I think I'll stick with colored pencils from now on...And no, it's not part of the character, unfortunatly.


Wow, thank you for the advice! It's always helpful to have a new pair of eyes to see my drawings with! Your critique was very helpful. Smile
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 6:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

No problem. Very Happy Your pictures are rather good, you seem to got the shading and highlighting part down pretty well. As for the sign, I just tend to like art in my gallery to be only made by me, and adding official logos confused people sometimes and they will think you have drawn it.
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