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MeruMeru
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 03, 2009 11:34 pm    Post subject: I feel like a dead fish, need help on this.... Reply with quote

I need some second opinion on this so far.

http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-733110.html
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bowiegranap
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 04, 2009 12:03 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

necks.
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MeruMeru
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 04, 2009 4:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Is that all? Personally I thought the legs looked weird, but I guess not?
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Tala777
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 13, 2009 10:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think this looks nice Very Happy Particuarly with the poses.

but, you could always add a bit more detail to the eyes.
And the legs look too large for the body.
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Jinxie
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 24, 2009 9:55 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The guy on the left: The left side of his neck/shoulder area is funny. Make the part sloping up to his neck more horizontal, otherwise he'll look like a hunchback . He's also quite barrel-chested, so maybe make his left arm a little wider to compensate. The thigh of his left leg is also way too short. Elongate it, almost to the edge of the page, and it'll look better Very Happy

The guy on the right: Much better, but make his hips wider and make it more obvious where his thighs are. His expression is great!

Hope this helps!
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OyajiMurakami
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 11:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I agree about the neck on the left side guy. His shoulders just need to be brought down. His 'rear end' isn't big enough there for his thigh isn't long enough.

The guy in the middle is good as far as I can tell. Because of his poofy jacket it makes up for his lack of neck. There isn't enough of the guy on the right to make a good advice one yet.

If this helps here's a referance guide, cause explanations can be hard to understand when you're trying to fix a drawing. ^^ I loved when people gave me referance guides when I started drawing, it helped me lots.


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