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roxahere
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 06, 2010 11:50 am    Post subject: all kinds of critics that help me are allowed Reply with quote

hmm i just finished it. soo what do you think?
http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p288/Ancuuta/DSC02739.jpg
sory for the quality...i'll instal my scanner this week.
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 06, 2010 6:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

If the lines were redone with some dark ink and some shading and bright colors was added, it would look really adorable! Despite the quality, I think the lineart is worth it. I like the style you used for her face. C; Reminds me of a bubbly art style in a manga I saw.

They made their noses like that too.

The one thing I want to see something change is the lack of hand expressions. The background is good as long as you don't color more brightly than the girl, because then she would lose focus. You can draw her left hand coming from the bottom doing a peace sign or something to take up space.

The picture almost looks like something a girlfriend would send to her boyfriend as a postcard from far away! Good luck!
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Touzoku-joou
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 06, 2010 9:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Open up whatever image editing program you use (presumably whatever comes with your scanner works), and use your Flip Horizontal option.

This might open you up to a few of the more glaring issues.
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 9:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

thx for the tips^^ needed them.luckylace222 u are right^^ hmm i'll start working at it right away. Touzoku-joou i'll tryD:
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SweetxinsanityxSarah
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 9:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I agree with luckylace mostly however IMO the shoulders are a tiny bit too broad. Other than that you are very good at backrounds. Much better than myself. xD

Keep up the good work hun and try to darken the lines like what lucky said. Cause on some moniters a pic like this will barely be visible unless the user squints to see it. Other than this it is an adorable piece of work. n_n
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