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The End Of A Girl's World

 
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 8:55 pm    Post subject: The End Of A Girl's World Reply with quote

She comes home from another bad day
When she arrives, nobody is there.
When will things begin to turn her way?
The scars on her arms: no one's aware.

It's time to wash the feelings away.
The warm skin clashes with the cold blade,
As the burning tears run down her face.
All of the scars symbolize self hate
Will her world end today?

You said you wouldn't just let them win
People make fun of you all the time
Stand up; don't let them hurt you again
Forget their words; let them slip your mind
They're just jealous; don't listen to them

I wish I had the chance to save you.

It's time to wash the feelings away.
The warm skin clashes with the cold blade,
As the burning tears run down her face.
All of the scars symbolize self hate
Will her world end today?

As the final slits rip through her flesh,
Blood gushes out of the open cuts.
Spilling to the floor, it looks so fresh.
As she falls down, her eyes slowly shut.

She just couldn't take it anymore.
Gave it all up and dropped to the floor.
Her world is over forever more.
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SweetxinsanityxSarah
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 8:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very nice. Love the clever rhyming.
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 9:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very Happy Thanks!
SweetxinsanityxSarah wrote:
Very nice. Love the clever rhyming.
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setzaroth
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 30, 2010 12:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Can anyone write poetry that isnt juvenile and emo?
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