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orianajones
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 5:45 pm    Post subject: Tips please Reply with quote

contains toplessness lol

anyway, can you guys give me anythips to improve this peice?

http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-762331.html
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 5:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

They have the proportions of Hollywood aliens. Heads are not that large.
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orianajones
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 5:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

i made them larger because they are anime... maybe i went a little over board ^^
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 6:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

orianajones wrote:
i made them larger because they are anime...

Maybe that's your problem. If you want to draw well, for example body proportions, you have to study from reality, not fiction. Anime, in fact cartooning itself is already a simplified and stylized 'essence' of how to communicate the character being drawn. If that's all you study from, you're missing out on a LOT.

As an old saying goes, you must "learn the rules like a master, before you can break them like an artist".
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 6:39 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think you did go overboard with the size of their heads and I would suggest looking at some real people and some actual anime characters to get the proportions down. Other than that though I think it looks pretty good. Smile
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