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orianajones
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 13, 2010 6:12 pm    Post subject: is this a decent plot line start? Reply with quote

If I were in your shoes plot line.

I plan to make Billy the main character of the story. But I also plan to swap point of views at some parts of the story.

Part one – billy joins a chat site. This is in her pov. She starts talking to this guy. when she gets offline she has to take care of her 7 siblings. she lives in australia and her family doesnt have much of a income.
Part two – skyler pov. he lives in america with his rich family. his parents ague a lot though.
Part three – Billys school and social life.
Part four – older brothers are acting suspicious.
Part five – new guy at school... from america.
Part six – Lacey (5 years old) catches her older brothers with drugs and gets severely injured. billy tries to stop the fight and gets cought in the middle with mild injuries.
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Bowiegranap2
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 14, 2010 2:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Australia has one of the most expensive internet connections in the world.

If she has 7 siblings to take care of and doesn't have much of an income, why on earth does she have an internet connection and spending time on a chatroom?
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orianajones
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 18, 2010 12:18 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

well i kind of got the idea from my current living erangements.

we have five people living here. we did have more but they recently moved out. no-one had a job so things are tight. but as you can see we still managed to have the internet.

There is actually a company that gives 500gig for $60 a month aswell.

Does that make much sence?
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luckylace222
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 18, 2010 3:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like a story if there is bear malling or the random adventurous kungfu battle. If you add some of that in there, I swear your story will get the Pulitzer Prize!
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orianajones
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 23, 2010 1:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

i was actually planning to add rape and murder in it
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