Firiel Has No Life
Joined: 13 Feb 2012 Posts: 620
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Posted: Thu Jun 28, 2012 8:57 pm Post subject: |
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Mm. Nice clean rhymes. A little bit singsong, maybe, which isn't my favorite mode of poetry, but it works with a peaceful, playful subject like this.
Is the poem intended to loop? |
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