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FallenRaindrops Newb
Joined: 19 Jun 2010 Posts: 3
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Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 6:39 am Post subject: Bloody Waters |
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Bloody Waters
I Die Amongst The Blood Red Waters
The Bodys Drifting At My Feet
I Try To Scream But Im Already Gone
Drifting Down The Bloody Waters
Again I Try To Scream
But Now I Know All Hope Is Gone
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setzaroth Cold Warrior
Joined: 03 Jul 2007 Posts: 1960
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Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 5:23 pm Post subject: |
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why is all the poetry I read....well
self destructive, immature and downright emo... |
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Yvette My First Post!
Joined: 25 Jun 2007 Posts: 1
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Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2012 6:31 am Post subject: |
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Well. To say it lightly, everyone has a different opinion on how the world around them is perceived. Poetry is all about the way the author is looking at it.
Say you look at a falling leaf. You might see the beauty in its drifting whereas I might see the turn of season. Its all about how you look at it. Poetry is nothing more than the expression of one's soul and how you feel about a particular something. |
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Firiel Has No Life
Joined: 13 Feb 2012 Posts: 620
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Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2013 8:01 am Post subject: |
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Sorry, but is "bodys" supposed to be "body's" (contraction of body is, meaning probably the poet's own body) or "bodies" (plural, meanign the poet is dying in a mass tragedy)? |
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luckylace222 Site Helper
Joined: 05 May 2007 Posts: 1545 Location: Baby Fishy
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Posted: Tue Feb 26, 2013 8:11 pm Post subject: |
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Now I have a real challenge for you as a poet.
Write a happy poem. _________________ [size=10]“Far better is it to dare mighty things, to win glorious triumphs, even though checked by failure...than to rank with those poor spirits who neither enjoy much nor suffer much, because they live in a gray twilight that knows not victory nor defeat.” ~Theodore Roosevelt [/size] |
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