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[Lasher]

cause i tend to type to fast, faster than my thoughts really and i don't take the time to pause or i hit certain keys before i'm suppose to, that's why i spell a lot of things wrong.

not to mention i went from being an ap honor stupid, to going to this private school for the past year, in which we do nothing, and get away with murder, and what material we do have, it is all 8th grade level T_T I took a test to prove that i wasn't learning, and my score was lower on it then when i took it a year ago....they just shrugged and made up some excuse T_T

i have to have a meeting with my district school board about it, its getting the point where i'm forgetting how to spell silly little things and i get way to confused way to easily.

It's a fact, that when you don't learn for long periods of time, your brain starts to deteriorate and little things you knew, are no just gone and you can't remember. *sighs* long story.

But yes, i hate bad grammar, when it comes to my more serious writing material, i don't mind so much in the forums, it's all good and fun here. Nothing serious, but otherwise, when it comes to my writing, i write it, i spell check it, and read through it.


Like i said though, when i posted my first story, i wrote it rather fast, didn't even hardly spell check it and never proof read it. I was super hyper and up for days at a time during the summer, doing anything and everything all at once. Most of my friends thought i was on something, i was just having a really prolonged high point, but man or man did i crash afterwards T_T

[Powtaz]

when u write on the net, grammar and spelling slip away.
naaaa,u r worrying way to much Lasher dear, even the pros have their ups and their downs.

[Lasher]

of course, half the pros can say the words, but they can't spell them, what the hell do you people think editors are for? They don't get paid for nothing you know!

[Powtaz]

i think they get paid for editing.
am i right??

i think im right.

[Powtaz]

i have a question directed at you.

Is it bad that i review every chapter? cause, im starting to think that maybe i'm reviewing too much. i might be revealing alot of stuff in my reviews to, that maybe i shouldnt. so um, do u want me to shorten when i review?

[Lasher]

NO!

Reviews are the ultimate thing to get for any writer, they are a must and always craved for.

Ask Li, i made him review a new story called "Blood Lines" and the first chapter to be revised and edited of "Ride of the Demons" So i need all the reviews i can get.

So review all you want.

I love reviews! i get grumpy and less creative without them. They give me ideas and inspiration. i feed on them

GIVE ME REVIEWS GOD DAMMIT!!!! Or i might just have to hurt you.

[Powtaz]

lol, i read 5 chapters today. and i reviewed all 5, so, now i am finished up2 chapter 9.


yaaaaaaay! go mysterious woman!

[Lasher]

Just got home pow, and i read your reviews, and oh my god i love you! Thank you for you input, it means so much and helps me a lot. yaaay! ^_^

[Powtaz]

hehe. no problem at all.
i like reviewing things that need to be reviewed, because they are so great.
lol
i love u 2. lol

[Lasher]

ANYONE! AND EVERYONE!

Please click the following link and read this prologue to a story i'm writing.

WARNING: it is an adult site, adult in that some of the writing contains adult material in it. Anyone who clicks on the link, automatically acknowledges this and agrees to what they are doing.

NOTICE: This specific link leads to nothing hard core. No actual sex, clothes are still on and such, but there is definete contact. (i know i spelled that wrong but it's 4am okay)

http://adultfan.nexcess.net/aff/story.php?no=19820

After you've read, click the "Review Blood Lines" at the bottom, say what you think, etc etc.