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LexLuthorsVictimNJustAFriend
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I wrote a Superman FanFic recently and would like a few people to read my story and tell me what could be changed or improved? I'd appreciate it very much.
It's not easy to be me... |
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LexLuthorsVictimNJustAFriend
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[BUMP] I'm a little Teapot short an stout
Here is my bent arm here is my spout
There is no medical name for what I've got
I'm half human and half pot.... [/Bump] |
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theWriter
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Heeeyyy...I've read this before!
Wow...When the deadline comes up, I'll tell you what I thought of it as a judge...
But as a fellow writer, I must say that it had spunk. It made me almost reconsider Superman as my favorite hero...But Batman will always be the coolest!  Heh-heh.
One thing, though, so that you don't get eaten alive: don't bump. Though the comment was amusing, and lyrical nonetheless...I guess I could avaluate it as a critique, and I must say, what an excellent poem!
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