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VincentValentine13 Forum Stalker
Joined: 14 Oct 2005 Posts: 1306 Location: Delaware, The United States of America
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Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2006 4:23 pm Post subject: |
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Well, this is just a little forum to post your own stories. However, this is not to perform critiques, but instead to get people to notice your work. See, I notice that people have a hard time seeing work when they are in the critique section, though I'm not too sure why....so, I'm making this, that way, people can discuss the writing of another and post their own without having to worry about people not seeing their story posts or not, see? Think of it as a fanlisting for those who like fanfiction more then drawing!
Okay, here's mine:
This one is an American McGee/Final Fantasy 7 crossover. This is actually rather original in my opinion because I have yet to find one like it!
Down The Rabbit Hole and What Vincent Found There
Post and proclaim your writing talent! _________________ [img]http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k56/veggie_02/tamaki02.gif[/img]
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theWriter Very Oldbie
Joined: 19 Nov 2005 Posts: 2689 Location: Big Sky Country
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Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2006 5:17 pm Post subject: |
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This is, okay, Vincent, but I think the showing off part belongs in the Fanfiction critiques...much to your dismay, I know. _________________ [color=red][url=http://www.fanart-central.net/user-theWriter.php]What[/url] [url=http://untitledroadway.deviantart.com/] does[/url] [url=http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1015309/] it all[/url] [url=http://www.fictionpress.com/~thetwilightpen] MEAN?[/url][/color] |
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VincentValentine13 Forum Stalker
Joined: 14 Oct 2005 Posts: 1306 Location: Delaware, The United States of America
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Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2006 5:29 pm Post subject: |
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Darn it...foiled again.... _________________ [img]http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k56/veggie_02/tamaki02.gif[/img]
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Nilitac_Tesgrah Oldbie
Joined: 17 Dec 2005 Posts: 2496 Location: Glaring at Google SketchUp for shutting down automatically. Again.
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Posted: Fri Feb 24, 2006 4:50 am Post subject: |
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*puts away aluminum foil* ^^; _________________ Best Quote Ever: "B&."- Said by multiple people.
Everytime a n00b does something stupid - spams, harasses, refuses to read the rules - I hit my head on the desk. Please dun mack my poor noggin suffer drain bamage. |
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VincentValentine13 Forum Stalker
Joined: 14 Oct 2005 Posts: 1306 Location: Delaware, The United States of America
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Posted: Fri Feb 24, 2006 8:34 am Post subject: |
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.....anyway*looks at tin foil and shrugs* I still wil...um....continue to brag as long as I...um...can?
Anyway, this story I wrote is pretty good, I think. I like it, and enjoyed this first chapter, but that's beside the point. Please READ it! _________________ [img]http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k56/veggie_02/tamaki02.gif[/img]
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Nilitac_Tesgrah Oldbie
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Posted: Fri Feb 24, 2006 1:01 pm Post subject: |
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I did. ^_^ I really like it. A twist on a classic game with a classic, rather grotes-Q story... And game. _________________ Best Quote Ever: "B&."- Said by multiple people.
Everytime a n00b does something stupid - spams, harasses, refuses to read the rules - I hit my head on the desk. Please dun mack my poor noggin suffer drain bamage. |
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Lurking_Shadow_Queen Member
Joined: 07 Feb 2006 Posts: 48
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Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2006 11:39 am Post subject: |
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AH Vinnie...so glad to have found this forum (I know you'd told me about it but forgot where you said it was ) But erm...yeah I luv all of your stories (of the ones I've read)
Oh and I FINALLY got one of my FanFics up and running (although I haven't been able to figure out some of the stuff...like naming the chapters on the drop down thing) Oh well...I'm going to start a Corpse Bride Fanfic and a Nightmare Before Christmas one too. yippee for me. OH and I've started a wizard of OZ one too. :wub: |
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ErdeKaiser Forum Scalleywag
Joined: 04 Mar 2006 Posts: 947 Location: New York
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Posted: Fri Mar 24, 2006 6:56 pm Post subject: |
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I guess is wasn't bad. Sorry but I felt like it was like Kingdom Hearts a little. _________________ [URL=http://z3.invisionfree.com/ErdeKaiser/index.php?act=idx][img]http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i168/Erdey/Banners/BB2.jpg[/img][/URL] |
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VincentValentine13 Forum Stalker
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Posted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 10:21 am Post subject: |
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I can understand that. Still, should I have him meet Alice, or leave him alone? Aah, the Cheshire Cat knows....and he won't tell me! _________________ [img]http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k56/veggie_02/tamaki02.gif[/img]
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Fayore Moderator
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Posted: Sun Apr 23, 2006 6:44 pm Post subject: |
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Just like to note that someone who brags a lot is more commonly called a braggart, rather than a bragger. I dunno, "bragger" seems to have a... "lower writing/vocab level" feeling to it. :X _________________ [url=http://vdexproject.net/user.php?user=15636][img]http://vdexproject.net/p/15636/trainer.png[/img]
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VincentValentine13 Forum Stalker
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Posted: Mon Apr 24, 2006 4:06 am Post subject: |
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^_^ You're right, Fayore! Hee hee! Shame on me and my tiny vocabulary! And here I thought it was a rather extensive vocabulary from which I simply decided not to partake in the richness of! _________________ [img]http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k56/veggie_02/tamaki02.gif[/img]
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Fayore Moderator
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Posted: Mon Apr 24, 2006 6:01 am Post subject: |
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You know it. Especially when you have to go out of your way to make a post that exemplifies your "vocabulary."
I'm under the impression that if your posts don't always look like that, you're trying too hard. _________________ [url=http://vdexproject.net/user.php?user=15636][img]http://vdexproject.net/p/15636/trainer.png[/img]
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Nilitac_Tesgrah Oldbie
Joined: 17 Dec 2005 Posts: 2496 Location: Glaring at Google SketchUp for shutting down automatically. Again.
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Posted: Mon Apr 24, 2006 12:01 pm Post subject: |
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I must say that he thought that you meant that he always had to type like that. _________________ Best Quote Ever: "B&."- Said by multiple people.
Everytime a n00b does something stupid - spams, harasses, refuses to read the rules - I hit my head on the desk. Please dun mack my poor noggin suffer drain bamage. |
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Fayore Moderator
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Posted: Mon Apr 24, 2006 4:19 pm Post subject: |
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I did. The point was that if you don't always use your vocabulary extensively in everyday, normal speech, then when you make a post like that it comes off as if you're trying too hard. At what? Well, perhaps at pleasing others, pleasing yourself, or just attempting to be satirical or witty.
And it's not a very good thing. :\ Especially since it's impossible to pretend to be witty. _________________ [url=http://vdexproject.net/user.php?user=15636][img]http://vdexproject.net/p/15636/trainer.png[/img]
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VincentValentine13 Forum Stalker
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Posted: Mon Apr 24, 2006 4:54 pm Post subject: |
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^_^ I think you may be looking a bit too deep into this!I was trying to be silly. I like the nonsensical, and so, when I made that post, I was try to put a bit of laughter into it. Yes, laughter, because it made me laugh when I posted it. I figured that it would make you laugh. _________________ [img]http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k56/veggie_02/tamaki02.gif[/img]
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