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		theWriter Very Oldbie
  
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				 Posted: Tue Feb 28, 2006 6:34 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				 Okay, here's the deal. In Free Writing I've written some stuff I think would be great to continue on...The problem is that I don't know WHICH one to pick. So, my little critiquers, I want you to read all of these, yes ALL OF THESE and tell me which ones I should continue on.
 
 
Merci. 
 
 
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		LexLuthorsVictimNJustAFriend Has No Life
  
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				 Posted: Tue Feb 28, 2006 7:22 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				|  I think that you shoud continue "Forgive me, Father" It is beautifully written and would, in fact, make a wonderful book (if you are willing to go that far). I really want to know who he killed. ^_^  | 
			 
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		theWriter Very Oldbie
  
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				 Posted: Wed Mar 01, 2006 2:39 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				 Thanks, Naomi. I really did like that one as well...Though I don't quite know how the Catholic Church works  . Oh well, a little research won't hurt, eh?
 
 
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		LexLuthorsVictimNJustAFriend Has No Life
  
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				 Posted: Wed Mar 01, 2006 5:24 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				|  I also liked the one with the drug dealing lawyer, that would be fun to continue.  | 
			 
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		theWriter Very Oldbie
  
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				 Posted: Thu Mar 02, 2006 5:23 am    Post subject:  | 
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				 Yeah...me too. Thanks, Naomi. I think I'll start with those two and see where it takes me. 
 
 
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