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Astri How can I get a custom title thing?
Joined: 30 Dec 2005 Posts: 912 Location: Valencia, CA
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Posted: Sun May 14, 2006 8:56 pm Post subject: |
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Hello again. This is a fanfic that I wrote in one night, and I feel proud of it, but also kind of like I have to improve it. So I was wondering if anybody would read this and let me know what they think.
- Title: The Combine of Sin
- Rating: PG-13 ~ R--a bit violent, rather obviously anti-religious, and based around a shonen-ai/ yaoi romance
- Type: Fanfiction
- Category: Maze: The Mega-Burst Space. However, I hope very much that whether you've seen Maze or not, you can still appreciate this fanfiction. It happens about a decade before the anime, and I honestly think that prior knowledge of the series is unnecessary for the fanfic.
- Fantasy, Romance
- Jipha + Sai (original character)
- A fanfiction describing the life of a young man named Jipha, before he was ensnared by the evils of the Jaina Holy Group and transformed into a ruthless assassin.
This fanfiction is about six pages long, which is pretty short for me, so...I hope I manage to hit everything I needed to in it. Please, let me know.
The Combine of Sin
Thank you very much for your time. _________________ [color=blue]Disgaea's [url=http://www.fanart-central.net/story-31977.html]Overlords Dance[/url] in [url=http://www.fanart-central.net/story-25745.html]Worlds Beyond Infinity[/url] while [url=http://www.fanart-central.net/story-27428.html]Mifuyus Magical Multiplying Mole[/url] reads the epic [url=http://www.fanart-central.net/story-25652.html]Chronicles of Yord[/url], and you learn that your [url=http://www.fanart-central.net/story-37925.html]Craving[/url] for [url=http://www.fanart-central.net/story-37922.html]Finding a Heart of Snow[/url] is [url=http://www.fanart-central.net/story-37924.html]Taboo[/url] in [url=http://www.fanart-central.net/story-37910.html]VG[/url] unless you dare undertake [url=http://www.fanart-central.net/story-32962.html]The Combine of Sin[/url]...[/color] |
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Nilitac_Tesgrah Oldbie
Joined: 17 Dec 2005 Posts: 2496 Location: Glaring at Google SketchUp for shutting down automatically. Again.
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 4:08 am Post subject: |
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I haven't read the whole thing, just the first chapter, but wowie. I feel so bad for Jipha. :(
EDIT: I went back and read it again, then I realized it was just one chapter. :wacko: _________________ Best Quote Ever: "B&."- Said by multiple people.
Everytime a n00b does something stupid - spams, harasses, refuses to read the rules - I hit my head on the desk. Please dun mack my poor noggin suffer drain bamage. |
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Merlinhamill Member
Joined: 07 May 2006 Posts: 47
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Posted: Tue May 16, 2006 6:20 pm Post subject: |
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Interesting.... |
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