~*kingdom Hearts Twin Devils Takedown

[AngelicHeart]

This story was writen by one of my friends and me.Ok to be truefull me and him did this story over the phone,I would call him and he would call me.We acted the storys out like ex.He would be Sora and I would be Kairi,But we were all the chartarters at a point in the story.It may sound easy to you but It requierd al lot of plaining,We had owr shares of fight while doing this. At the point were are now we've made over 40 storys All going off one anouther.He wonted to redo this story not really to change it but to have the fun of doning this story once more,But we stoped on the fact he wonted to change the ending to it!I cant tell you what that is yet Ive only goten the frist 7 chapters done, please mind the bad grammer and the mispelled words Im going to edit it when Im done typeing this whole story up.There is a song that one of the chartarters sings a little of and it Is called
"my own Prison"By Creed.You may have seen this on other sites becouse its most likely I posted it there or someone else did.keep in mined that THIS IS NOT THE ENTIRE STORY
IT MAYNOT MAKE SCENCE IN THE CHAPTERS IVE WRITEN.If you would like to use it Pm me and tell me why you want to use it,if its for anouther site please tell what it is that way I will know where ts going.Thanx-AngelicHeart



Kingdom Hearts twin Devils Takedown *Part #1*
Chapter 1
The Same Old Team, a new Dream.

The story begins were Kingdom Hearts one leaves off….
Sora, Donald and Goofy are walking along a dirt road Sora kicking a rock or two a long the way.
Donald: Now what do we do?
Sora: We got to find Riku and King Mickey
Goofy: But uh where do we start looking for that there door to the light?
All: *Sigh*
All three look up too see Pluto walking by carrying a letter
Goofy: hi there Pluto where have you been?
Sora: uh
Goofy: Garsh that’s the king’s seal
Sora: Have you seen King Mickey?
Pluto runs in the other direction
Sora: Guys let’s go!
Sora and the gang start chasing Pluto
*Two Hours Later…….Sora and the gang are worn out from chasing Pluto.
Sora: let’s stop and rest
Goofy :……….( is out of Breath from chasing Pluto)...SURE!
Sora: Great!
Donald: let’s stay in that cave over there (points to a cave)
Sora: Sure if you want to be eaten by a bear!
Donald: No Bear going to eat us
Goofy: Yeah HeYuk
Sora: well I guess
Goofy: YOU GUESS! Sora you’re safe with us
Sora: yeah your right…………*Sigh*
Goofy: you just need some rest that’s all (smiles)
Sora…
Gang enters cave
Donald Angerly) FINE!
Donald leaves)
Goofy walks over to Sora and sets down. Sora looking in to the darkness of the other room.
Goofy: Sora?
Sora:……………………………..
Goofy: SORA!
Sora: Uh… Oh… Hi
Goofy:Sora..Are you alright?
Sora: I Fine...it’s…… just…
Goofy: (almost shouts) It’s just what?
Sora:I just miss my friends my home, my family
Goofy: Your family?
Sora: Yeah My Mom my Dad my……..Hold on don’t you have a family?
Goofy: yeah of course…..God I miss him so much…
Sora: Who?
Goofy: My Son….Max
Sora: you have a son? You never told me that!
Goofy: (smiles) You never asked
Sora: (moans indiscuese)
Goofy: looks like its starting to rain (looks outside)
Soar: Where’s Donald
Goofy: He went to get some fire wood…….He should had been here by now
Sora: I sure hope he’s all right
Goofy: I sure he’s doing fine well at lest I hope he is
Soar: ummm…..
Goofy:……….uh Sora what are you doing heyuk
Sora holding a rock drawing on the stone walls of the cave.
Goofy: sora you can draw pretty well
Sora: Thanks
Goofy: uh……Donald? What ….
Donald enters the room with water and mud dripping down his face
Donald: DON’T SAY A WORD!!!
Goofy: hahahahahahhahahahah
Sora:*Trying hard not to laugh*
Goofy walks over to Donald, Donald pulls out the wet wood and uses wind to dry the wood.
Donald: Fire
Starts fire
Sora: I’m going to bed!
Sora drifts of too sleep hearing Goofy and Donald saying *he’ll be there*
Sora knowing they where speaking of their king falls a sleep. Sora awakes to see that Donald and goofy where gone!
Sora: Donald? Goofy?
Sora walks over to the wall to see a note from Goofy and Donald saying….


“Sora, Sorry about leaveing with out wakeing you up but you were a sleep! Me and Donald knew that you needed your Sleep.? Sees a big change in the handwriting? Sora, That was Goofys handwriting it’s a little hard to read ani’t it? Well anyway Goofy and I have gone to find some food. We’ll be back in a few hours.
GOOFY.
Donald Duck?
Sora Thinks to himself) Well they could have at lest let me know what time they left! Or at least what area they where going to be in. OR SOMETHING!
Sora looks outside at the early morning sun. The smell of mud and pine trees filled the air.Sora could see the once beautiful land was now covered in mud, sticks, pine corns, and other debrea.
Sora: Wow…
Sora could tell that it was about 6 in the morning. Tired and bored Sora goes back to sleep.Sora dreams of the last day of school……It started that morning
Sora had over slept as usual. Sora's mom had woken him up because his little brother had turned off his alarm (as a joke) Sora rushed out the front door to catch his bus.
Sora angrily) MAN I MISSED THE FREAKEN BUS!
Sora runs up the side walk to try to catch it at the stop light.Sora runs up the street, jumps over fence, and finally gets to the end of the street. But is stopped by a cop.
Cop: It’s to dangerse to cross the street kid with for all the cars to stop moving
Sora looks up and down the street and sees no cars coming
Sora: But sir my bus is right there!
Cop: Kid DID YOU HEAR A WORD I JUST SAID?
Sora:Leason my bus is right there! And there isn’t any cars coming!
Cop: KID YOU SHOULD BE A BUS RIDER NOT A KID RUNING AROUND IN THE STREET!
Sora, mad and frustrated knew it was best to keep his big mouth shut.Sora could hear some one shouting? Heal boy heal!? Sora knowing it was Mr. Dickens and his Germanshaperd on there daily walk.Sora paying no attention, looked across the street, thinking how he could get pass the cop.
Mr.Dickens: Sparky STOP! LOOK OUT KID
Sora not looking at the moument, thinking “The next person who calls me KID, I'm going to bite their head OFF!?Sora hears a loud bark from be hide him, and turns quickly to see what all the commotion was about.
Sora: AHH
Sora runs across the street with the dog not even 5 feet behide him.Sora Hearing the cop say?Hey KID!? Sora running as fast as he could up Avenue line street, sees his bus right ahead of him, Sora fly’s past it. Riku had his window open.
Riku: Hey Sora? You got a new girlfriend? Haha
Sora Angrily) Shut up Riku!
Sora arrives at school (at last) Sora Runs up the hall and stops every time he passes a classroom door.Sora finally gets to his class.Sora out of breath stops and sets in his set .Kairi setting next to him.
Kairi: you miss the bus again Sora?
Sora: Yeah some way to end the 8th grade uhh?
Kairi: Yeah someway
Sora: Well at lest Riku’s not in our grade our class. Can you imagine what he would say?
Kairi: Hum. He’ll say something like “your still a Kid Sora?or something
Sora: Yea he would
Teacher: Ok Settle down class I Know it’s the last day but the years not over yet. Now time for a test, now don’t worry it’s not for a grade it’s just to see how much you have learned over the year.
Sora reserves his test.
Name: Sora
1. What is most important to you? Friendship
2. What’s you greatest fear? To be Indeseve
3. What do you want out of life? To Be Strong
4. If you could chose power out of these three witch would it be?
(A) Power To heal and aid you friends
( Power of the warrior, mass Destion
© Power of the mystic
Answer=B
5. Give up? Answer=c
Sora turns in his test.
Sora:*think to him self* Hold On When did we learn that? That test was based on opinion.















Chapter 2
Thus the mighty have fallen

Sora’s dream ends with the words Sora! Sora opens his eyes and sees Goofy right in front of face.
Sora: Ahh
Goofy falls back from the shout
Goofy: That’s someway to show your appreciation of us getting you some food!
Sora: Sorry it’s just I wasn’t expecting to see you right when I wake up.
Goofy:*smiles*I was just kidding, so were you having a dream?
Sora: Yea!
Goofy: About what?
Sora: my last day of school.
Goofy: Hum I wonder if it’s because you miss it?
Sora: ME MISS SCHOOL! Fat chance
Goofy: Well you hungry?
Sora: Well that depends on what were having
Goofy: Well me and Donald couldn’t fined much! But, we found some berries
Sora:*thinking to him self*its probable poisonous or something*talking*No thanks
Goofy: Ok well Donald is whiting out side for us
Sora: Ok let’s go!
Sora and the gang leave the cave a set out on finding Pluto.Sora, Donald, and goofy have been searching for hours, calling Pluto’s name.
Goofy: Huh? Look footprints
Donald: They look like Pluto’s
Sora: Well then let’s follow them.
The Mysteries Footprints led them to an abandon barn
Donald: well let’s go in
Goofy: Ive got a real bad feeling about this
Sora and the gang enter the barn. Sora looking to his right, while Goofy and Donald move forward and looking ahead stop were there standing.Sora unaware of what was going on, was trying to figerout what was wrong.
Sora: Guys?
Goofy…
Donald…
Sora: Goofy? Donald?
Goofy and Donald…
Sora: Come on this is no time for games!
Standing behind Sora was who it appeared to be “King Mickey?
King Mickey…HEHEHE
Sora: What?
Mickey: You are a fool Sora!
Sora: What are you talking about?
Mickey: This is going to turn out just like I imdaged! Right Goofy and Donald
Goofy:*in a zombie like voice*J.u.s.t a.s you ..P..l..a..n..ed!
Sora: Goofy! Donald! Let’s get out of HERE!
Goofy and Donald: WERE NOT TAKING ORDERS FROM YOU EVER AGAIN!
Sora: huh….
Goofy and Donald draw their weapons
Sora: this a joke right?
Goofy and Donald Attack Sora. Sora falls to the ground
Sora: Ahh! What’s gotten in to you guys?
Mickey: Fool! No matter where you go darkness will always exsest
Mickey transforms into Ansem.
Sora: Ansem?
Ansem: Yes it is I
Sora: But you’re dead!
Ansem: I was till Sephiroth brought me back! HAHAHA
Sora: Sephiroth is here!
Sephiroth: With you out of the way. No one can stop us!
Sora: What did you do to Goofy and Donald?
Ansem: Who? Yes, you friends, im sorry but your friends are mine
Sora: What do you mean?
Sephrioth: It quit simple, really. Im contaling the dog dude and…
Ansem: I’m contaling the duck
Sora: Why?
Ansem: uh so we can get to you?
Sora: NO that’s not what I meant, I mean why Donald. I can understand Goofy, But, Donald?
Ansem: Moron
Sephiroth: Ansem shutup everytime you say something he ask you something about it! Then we answer then you say something else now shutup so I can finish the job.
Sephiroth pulls out his sword and slams Sora in the head. Sora falls to the ground.






Chapter 3
The evil team
Two years later………………..Riku returns to the island for the first time in two years.
Riku:*in a deeper voice*Kairi?
Kairi: Riku!
Riku: Oh my god it’s really you
Kairi:im so glad your alright.Riku weres Sora?
Riku:….Come..Follow me
Riku and Kairi board the air ship.Kairi is now 16 years old and Riku is 17.Kairi is very hyper,She is running back and forth to one side of the ship to the other.
Kairi: I can’t remerber the last I was on an air ship.Hey where we going anyway?
Riku:…Disney Castle
Kairi:Is Sora there?
Riku:uh yea….
Kairi and Riku finally arrive.
Kairi: look all the people! What the acation?
Riku:?Our heroes return party? Or something
Kairi: So where’s Sora
Riku: probable in the castle somewhere
Kairi: you don’t know!
Riku: well we can ask someone
Kairi: Who
Riku: Him? (Points to a person setting on the bench*
Kairi: ok
Riku and Kairi walk up to the person
Kairi: Hello? Mister
Riku: Hey that dude looks kind of like Goofy
Kairi: Should I take his headphones off?
Riku: no
Person:*singing*I hear thunder in the distance see a vision of a cross I feel the pain that was given on its said day of loss a lion roars in the darkness, only he holds the key…like to free me from my burning and grand me for eternally! Should have been there on a Sunday morning banging my head no time for moaning ani't got no time Should have been there on a Sunday morning banging my head no time for moaning ani’t got no time so I held my head up high fighting hate that burns inside so this fumes are myself pride and I say held captive form the sun this sun that shines is my leason….I cry out to god seeking only his disseton he stands alone and comefurms I created my own prison! Shou…*stops and sees Kairi*Huh*blushes*Hi
Riku: Goofy?
Person: Goofy? No im his son “Max?
Kairi: it’s very nice to meet you Max.
Riku: Im Riku and she’s Kairi
Max: It’s nice to meet you to. So is there anything I can help you with?
Riku: Well you see me and Kairi are looking for our dear friend Sora and...
Max: Say no more, follow me
Kairi:Is it just me or im I doing a lot of following today
Riku and Kairi Follow Max to the ball room
Max: here you are
Riku: are you still going back to your bench or are you going to stay here with us
Max:*thinks*I guess with you guys
Kairi: Sora
Sora: WHAT!
Max: uh Dad
Goofy:*in an evil voice*What do you want?!
Kairi: *To Riku*Riku! What’s wrong with them?
Riku: I don’t know
Riku, Kairi, and Max leave the room.
Riku: Man, now what do we do?
Max: Take it has it comes I guess
Two hours later……
Max: looks like the parties over
Riku: looks like it
Kairi: Hold on what about Sora and them?
Max: Huh?
Riku: They must still be inside
Max: Hey Riku! Why don’t you sneak in there and try fine out something
Riku: You Mean spy?
Max: Well no……Hold on! Yes that exactly what I mean!
Riku: ok
Max: Remember, Don’t say a word ! And if any thing happens report back here immdeutly !










Chapter 4
The story starts to unfold
Riku enters the room, trying not to make a sound. Riku heads toward the nearest statue. Riku sets down and doesn’t move a muscle.
Sora: What Fools?
Donald: Their clueless!
Goofy: How much longer
Sora: Soon
Goofy: How miney more worlds
Sora: Who Knows?
Donald: it doesn’t really matter at this point!
Sora: No one can stop us now! HAHAHHAHA
Goofy: Yes, your right “Ansem?
Riku: Ansem!
Sora: What the hell was that?
Goofy: I wouldn’t worry about it
Riku quickly realized that he and said that out loud, and leaves the room.
Max: Well?
Riku: it’s worse than we thought!
Max: What do you mean?
Riku: Ansems alive
Max: WHAT? BUT…but...but HES DEAD!
Riku: Yes I know, you’re going to have to go in there!
Max: Me why me?
Riku: Because of me and my big mouth
Max: you? Big mouth?
Riku: lesson you can’t go in there
Max: huh? How do you expect me spy on them without going in there?
Riku: Do you all have any airducks ?
Max: *thinks*……..Yea we do!
Riku: that’s great!
Max: Oh get it! You won’t me to spy on them by using the air vents. Right?
Riku:*nods*yep!
Max: I should have guessed
Max reaches into his pocket and pulls out a screwdriver. Max starts to unscrew the air vent cover. Max finally gets the air vent cover off.
Max: Ill be back soon
Max enters the air vent, he coughs when first entering the vent from all the dust. Max:*thinking to himself *?Gees you think they would clean this please up one and a while!? Max craws though a spider web. He quickly rubs it out. Max continues to craw, his’s hand comes a cross a small fury animal .Max not a bole to see, imminently jumps. Max bangs his head on the top of the vent, and grabs his head in pain. Max thinking to his self,? Everything bad happens to me, I don’t even wont to know what that smell is...?Max finally arrives finally arrives to the end of the air vent
Sora: Your right I guess we shouldn’t worry about them
Donald: this world will see its end soon
Goofy: All we have to do now is take care of this worlds foolish king and
Donald: and Queen…
Sora: Hahahaha
Donald: What about this worlds Keyhole
Sora: What we always do…..
All: Destroy it!
Donald: The People? And Traverlert town
Goofy: take there hearts to make our self’s stronger
Sora: Destroy the town
Donald: Hahaha
Max is shocked by this.?Oh my god? Max thinks to himself. Max moves as fast as he can though the vent. (Keep in mind that Max is covered in dust)
Max: Oh my god! RIKU! KAIARI
Riku: Well? (Takes a look a Max and almost starts to laugh)
Max: THERE GOING TO KILL THE KING AND QUEEN!
Riku: What?
Max: and Destroy the keyhole, and the people! AND TRAVERLUST TOWN
Riku: Max you got worn the king and queen
Max: ok hold on what about every one else
Riku: We will worn them.
Max heads down the hall to the kings throne room
Max: King Mickey? Queen Minnie?
Mickey: yes come in
Max:*bows* your majesty I’ve got some terrible news!
Mickey: yes what is it
Max: Sora, Donald and my dad are going to kill you!
The King and queen just laugh.
King Mickey: our heors? NO way HAHAHA
Max: But…..
King Mickey: that enough of this nonsense
Max: I’m not joking!




Chapter: 5
Long live the king and (queen)
Max, mad and frustrated leaves the room. Mean while ……out side the castle
Riku: Everyone get out of here!
Kairi: Come on! Please?
All the people just look up from what there doing and go on with their own business.
Kairi: Riku I don’t think there leasoning
Riku: lets just head on back to the castle and see if Max has had any luck.
Kairi: all right!
Riku and Kairi go back to the main lobby. Max standing next to the door still covered in dust. (Max is unawared of that fact)Riku and Kairi, trying hard not to laugh.
Max: What are you looking at?
Riku:*chuckling*
Kairi:….hahaha
Max….oookkkk? Well any luck?
Riku: no. You?
Max:*sighs*No
Riku: Me and Kairi will try to get all of the people out of traverlust town.
Max: allright and I try to stop them
Riku: right!
Riku and Kairi leave. Two loud screams can be heard though out the inter castle, they seem to be coming from the Kings thrown room. Max runs to the room of were the screams were coming.
Max: King MIC….
Max sees the two bodies of their town’s beloved king and queen lying in the floor. Max looks up and sees the coprets. *Sora, Goofy, and Donald* Goofy walks next to Max. Max, looking at the two bodies and looks at his dad.
Max:*shaking in fear*…..
Goofy: I can tell you have great power hidden deep inside of you
Max: Power?
Goofy: It’s the deep power of darkness.
Sora: There is darkness in every heart
Max turns toward Goofy, ready to doge any attack thrown at him
Max: Your changing sides now?!
Goofy: Change sides? I don’t recall saying I was on yours
Goofy pulls out two swords and swings at him. Max falls backwards trying not to get hit. Goofy throws his weapons up as if he was going to swing. Max puts his arms in front of his face, and shuts his eyes. Goofy falls to the ground.
Max opens his eyes to what was going on. Goofy, on his knees. A strange white light surrounds Goofy.
Goofy:*in Goofy’s really voice*Max get out of here!
Max: Dad?
Goofy: Max I’ve been contaled the entire time.
Max: By who?
Goofy: By … (shouts in pain) I can’t say, Max get out of town this town is going to be destroyed in the next 11 minutes. And treaver town in 41 minutes!
Goofy falls to the ground. And the darkness returns…
Goofy:*in the evil voice*HOW?
Max runs toward the door.
Sora: Get Him!
Heartless enter the room
Max: Holy crap!
Max backs up agenst a statue, all most falling over a broken pipe. He picks it up and does the only thing he can…..attack! Max, eliminating at lest 20 heartless, makes a run for it. He runs down the main hall way, down the stairs and out side the castle. Max realizes that no one was a round, empty cars and other automobiles, were all over the streets.
Max: Where are all the people?
Max looks at his watch
Max: man I only have 8 minents to get out of here!
Max runs to the first automobile he could find. It is a 4 wheeler. He gets on not knowing witch way to go. Max riding around think of a place out of town. When finally it hit him.
Max: I got it!
Max heads down hill to the boat dock. The boat dock wasn’t a part of Disney castle, this particular dock was also where the air ships where parked. Max looks at his watch? only 20 seconds to go? The clock is ticking; the boat dock is strait ahead. Max makes it to the dock just in time. He turns around and sees that his entire town was gone.
Max: Is this for real?









Chapter 6
Traverse Town, The end is near

As if hypnotized Max stands and stares at the nothingness that once one the most beautiful place in all the land. He turns and walks toward the airship, he turns and looks back to see if it was us his mind playing tricks on him. He conforms that it was horror able dream come true, continues to walk to the ship. He walks to the side of the ship and passes the side that had a medal in the shape of a square. Reading “MEDFSR?
Max: Never thought we would need this
“MEDFSR? meant Medical emergency or disaster for citizens and King/Queen.
The ship was built by the Disney automobile service.Max was among the ones that built the ship. But there was flaw in the planning of the ship, there would be too many people on board to get the ship off the ground, so the ship’s name was changed to “MEDKQ’’(Medical emergency or disaster for King/Queen)Max get aboard the ship. The ship was restocked every week with new food and was cleaned to prevent disease if the ship was ever used for the queen and king. Max walks to the plots set and tries to start the engine. The engine trys to cut on
Max :start you rusted pile of bolts!
Mad and frustrated, he continues to try to get the ship to start. He sets back in the set and kicks the steering wheel.The the engine starts
Max:HUH?But…..
Meanwhile in Traverse Town
Kairi: Riku?
Riku: huh (looks at Kairi dreamily)
Kairi: Where did you get the air ship at?
Riku: oh that? (Bushes)
Kairi: well?
Riku: Mickey gave it to me as a gift of thinks for helping him back at “kingdom Hearts?
Kairi: “kingdom Hearts??
Riku: The door to the light
Kairi: oh…….Yeah
Riku: ……..yeah
Kairi: So RRRRRRRiiiiikkkuuuu AHAAAA
The ground starts to shake and people are going everywhere
Riku: Kairi? Kairi!
Parts of building start to fall everywhere
Kairi: Riku!
Back in outer space Max is just arriving Traverse Town.
Max looks up at the sky, Its was growing black from all the smoke. He stands there for a moment as the smoke entered the atmosphere. As he entered the town he has a lack of air. He is repeatly thown to the ground by people trying to escape. Looking a head the dust was starting to clear, and a figuar of a girl. It appeared to be Kairi.
The part of the building beside her started to fall as the ground rumbled. Max gets to his feet, he runs and pushes her out of the way and rolls into the wall.
Max: Man That HURT!
Kairi: are you all right?
Max: Ill take a double cheese Burger and order of fries..(Shakes head)Man do I have a headache. Are all right
Kairi Giggles) I’m fine
Max: thats good
Both of them stand up
Max: Hold on where’s Riku
Kairi: well….
Max Grabs her shoulders and shakes her) WELL WHAT!?
Kairi pulls back and slaps him
Kairi: DON’T TOUCH ME. I HAVENT SEEN RIKU! WE GOT SEPERATED!
Max Touching his face) sorry…You didn’t have to slap me!
Kairi: You were invading my personal space!
Max: ….
The sound of Riku’s voice breaks the silence.
Max:you hear that?
Kairi:Yea it sounded like its comeing from that shop
She points to the item shop
Riku: Come on that’s not fair
Louie: Sorry that’s how much it cost
Riku: twohunderd munny for one potion? Come on that’s a rip off!
Max: Riku?
Riku: huh?Oh Hey guys.
Kairi: Riku(giggles)What are you doing ?
Riku (smiles)I’m getting us restocked
Kairi: That’s great! How much munny do we have?
Max: Now there was something I was supposed to tell you
Riku:we have 150 munny
Max: that’s Right! How could I forget? (Talks very fast) Sora, Donald, and My Dad murdered King Mickey and Queen Minnie. Then the sent these little black things on me! But I Bet the Living crap out of them! Then I got to a peer and my town was gone! Then my stupid air ship wouldn’t start! Then I got here and a lot of people keep stepping on me then I saved Kairi.Then She smacked me! Then we found that’s were we are know!
Kairi: Can you run that by us again?
Riku: NOO there is no need for that. Max you said something about your town be gone.
Max: Yeah My dad and them destroyed my town and (looks at his watch) this town will be blown up in four minutes….FOUR MINUTES
Riku: Let’s get out of here!
The earth starts rumble. All of them run for the town’s gate Riku, Max, Kairi, Louie and his two brothers at the end.
Riku: my ships gone! Someone stole my ship
Kairi: Greedy Hogs
Max: that’s ok, we can use mine!
All of them start to go to Max’s Ship. Out of breath, they get to the ship Riku nearly pulls the door off.
Max: Riku! Don’t do that!
Pushing one another in.
Riku: are all of you all right?
Max: looks like we are
Max walks to the cot pit and sits down.
Louie: Get us out of here Max!
Max trying to start it) IM TRYING! START YOU PIECE OF CRAP!!!
Kairi: It started
Max: Hold On this going to be a hell of a ride
They fly off in to space
Kairi: Look!
They all look back to Traverse Town, It blows up with a big sound that goes “boom? and a bright light, both that seem to happen all at the same time.
Riku: now what do we do















Chapter 7
The chase, the accident

Max:…I..Dont know Riku! But I do know that they are going after…
Louie: The black things that attacked you?
Max :…..( stares at him)…..What!? Are you asking me if Sora, Donald and my dad are going after those black things, when you know that they are helping them?
Louie: yes
Max: you moron!
Riku: those little black things are called heartless.
Max: Heartless?
Riku: Those without hearts. The darkness in people's hearts-that's what
Attracts them. And there is darkness within every heart.
Max: so the ones that get there hearts taken become heartless, Hold on! What happens when heartless without hearts get the hearts of other people do they remain heartless or become heartless with hearts or what?!
Riku stares at Max, slams him)
Max: Why the blue hell did you slam me?! That Hurts you know, (grabs face)
Riku: you were freakening out man!
Max: No I wasn’t
Louie: That’s how he normally acts
Riku:Oh…….
Kairi:Uhh..guys
Max: Shutup Louie that’s not true, I don’t normally act like im freaking out!!!!(Stands up from set)
Kairi: uhh guys
Louie: Oh really that’s one thing that you and your odd man don’t have in common you have a short temper
Kairi: Uhh..guys
Max Grabs Louie’s shirt) Take that back or I’ll… (Pulls fest up)
Kairi: GUYS!!!!!!
Max: huh? (Still holding Louie’s shirt, and his fest reminds unmoved)
Kairi: what is black, has incredible speed, large lasers with guns, and is right behind us
Max looks at Louie, lets go of his shirt, then pulls his fest to his side.)
Riku: Gee I don’t know
Kairi: Well that’s too bad, Becouse HERE IT COMES
Max sets back in his set trys to go faster. The Dark ship gets closer; everyone except Max looks out the window.
Louie: Hey Have you guys noticed that this is like one of those things that happen in….
Max: SUTUP LOUIE!!!(Still looking a head at the space)
The black ship pulls up beside them; looking though the window you can see that the driver was Sora and his gang.
Kairi: Riku!
Kairi eyes are filled with tears, Riku opens his arms to comfort her. The Dark ship slows down to pull its self behind the MEDKQ.The sound of gun being fired then the fallowing of lose control of the ship causes them to head down
Max: Oh….
Kairi: AHHH
Max: Come on! (Trying to regain control of the ship)
Riku:(looking out the other window)uhhhh…this is not good
Max: What them chasing us?
Riku: no…..Were going into a meteor shorwer
Louie: Were going to dieeee!!!AAAAAHHHHH
Max: No Louie, If you don’t stop screaming in my ear your going to die because im going to kill you!!!
Louie: Why can Kairi scream in your ear and I can’t?
Max: Because she’s a girl and you’re…..well hopefully not! (Is able to regain control of the ship)...That’s one less thing we’ve have to worry about.
Riku: uhh were did the Sora and them go?
Kairi looks out window) Maybe they…..went away
Riku: I wouldn’t be so sure...
All set quietly, as if not trying to make a sound, no one aboard makes a sound in hopes of not hearing the motor of Sora’s ship. For a monument the only sound was of them drifting though space, then a sudden bang is heard from behind.
Everyone on the MEDKQ shouts from fear or shock. The shots from their rival are repeatly knocking them off chorus, and then the horrible thing happened. The back door swings open from all the bullets slamming into it. Huey and Duey are all most sucked out but luckily Huey grabs the door handle with Duey holding on to him.Max gets out of the set to help both of them.
Max:Riku you drive the ship!
He reaches his hand out for Huey, mean while they are still being shot at and they are about to go into a meteor shower. Max struggles to pull them in with one hand, while the other is used to keep him from falling out. The next shot from Sora’s ship seemed to come so fast that time stopped as it blasted though space and toward the handle of the back door. Huey and Duey are no longer in site….
Max:……..I hate my life