Tai-chan-Enishi
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 Posted: Sat Dec 30, 2006 6:22 pm Post subject: Guardians' Trust (please critique) |
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- Title: Guardians' Trust
- URL: http://www.w338puq3y.homepage.t-online.de/viewstory.php?sid=28720
- Genre: Action/Adventure, General, Original, Romance, Fantasy
- Summary: They're sent off on a magical journey. Will it be the adventure they've been waiting for or will everything be ruined by a jewel being taken?
- Advisories: Mild Language, Mild Violence
So far, it's more of a rough draft than anything. I'd like critique, though, to know what I should add and take out to make this better. Thanks in advance. |
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