sirpeanut Member
Joined: 20 Mar 2007 Posts: 80 Location: hell...
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Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 9:46 am Post subject: Primal... |
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[b][u]Primal[/u][/b]
Vicious thoughts and primal urges,
violent feelings and power surges.
A lust for blood, a taste for flesh,
only satiated by someones death.
Hair like fur and nails like claws,
teeth like fangs and feet like paws.
I'll pick a victim, then snarl and growl,
kill it, feed, and let out a howl.
My inner beast has been let loose.
I'd beg for my life if I was you.
My senses have heightened, my sanity's gone,
I can kill you fast and painless or agonizing and long.
I'll choose the latter because, you see,
the sight of it, it pleases me.
Someone writhing in pain, it's great!
To see that fear, that pain, that hate!
Now before you die, I'll tell you my name.
The one thats done this to you, is...
[u][i]Jon Talbain[/i][/u]
It's a nice little Darkstalkers poem, wouldn't you say? It looked better on paper because I wrote the name in script like a signature! Please comment because I know I can use some constructive critisism. Besides, I'd also just like to know what people think of my work! |
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