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trueliesaa Forum Scalleywag
Joined: 24 Oct 2005 Posts: 984
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Posted: Thu May 03, 2007 1:35 pm Post subject: never gone |
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the tears fall from my eyes sometimes
and I remember well
he hurt you with his arrogance
I wish he'd burn in hell
the shot he fired was too large
and you were in its wake
despair seems to be in charge
he made a big mistake
but it means nothing to him
the life he took that day
the light of love is oh so dim
he took it all away
I know to him you were a pest
he did not care at all
but he did not do his best
to think before the call
your master was an evil one
so he knew, I'm sure
but you were killed by his shotgun
and you, my friend were pure
I don't know what his motives were
why he gave commands
because of him, you lost your fur
I'll never understand...
your memory lives here in me
and I won't let you die
struggle through this agony
I promise I will try... _________________ http://www.skjeret.com/images/WindWaker/NintendoGallery/G4/Mothula.jpg |
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Morbidmauler Oldbie
Joined: 06 Feb 2006 Posts: 2487 Location: wouldnt you like to know
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Posted: Thu May 03, 2007 1:39 pm Post subject: |
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...i have nothing to say...
meh, i'll try. i LURVS your poetry! i think this is the best yet. _________________ "We wake up in the morning and piss excellence"- some of my buddies. lol. |
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trueliesaa Forum Scalleywag
Joined: 24 Oct 2005 Posts: 984
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DemonRaven Member
Joined: 27 May 2007 Posts: 67 Location: who wants to know?
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Posted: Sun May 27, 2007 10:18 am Post subject: |
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[b]Nice poem.[/b] |
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Sam400 Has No Life
Joined: 05 May 2005 Posts: 594 Location: Shadow World
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Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 5:41 am Post subject: |
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SVEET! xDD _________________ Death isn't scary. Dying is the scary because you are not really sure whether to hold on to the strand of life or just to let yourself go free.
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Every one is a moon, and has a dark side which he never shows to anybody. |
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