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DemonRaven
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PostPosted: Sun May 27, 2007 2:46 pm    Post subject: My Poems Reply with quote

Red tears
I scream to the sky, but no one hears me
The streets are empty. I walk to find that I'm alone. I'm the invisible ghost that no one can see. I look towards the sky and scream one more time till my voice breaks out and I break down until the rain starts to pound the empty sidewalks and road. I fall to my knees as I start to cry the tears become one with the rain. My tears turn red and roll down my face. I rub my eye's but I can't see I'm blinded by red tears.

Im Tired
Im tired of this stupid life
always bringing me down
I'm tired of bleeding tears
as if no one is around
I'm tired of the staring and
The smart remarks what does life
want from me?
Faded pictures lay on the floor
Blood covered and old
Always thinking of you as if I would die old
I plunge the knife into my wrist
and the blood colored tears scream out
Shinning threw the blood struct tears
are old memories and now I'm angry
Ready I fall on the floor but no one can hear me.

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PostPosted: Sun May 27, 2007 4:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sweet Dreams
The rain pitter patters on these
cold empty streets that I walked Enormous times,
I've never felt alone like this before you left me falling through the floor
I can't really recall any times that I acted as if I hated you
But my dreams bare scary thoughts of you. These haunt me what have I done Because sleep seems to be no option, silently I fall onto my knees and into a puddle here's to sweet dreams.
Just Maybe
Maybe my life will turn around,
Maybe my life will bring me down,
Maybe my grades will score up high,
and maybe I will soar the sky,
Maybe this cut will end it all,
or maybe just to the hospital,
Maybe my life will bring me Somewhere,
and maybe it will bring me here,
as I sit at this roof ready to fall
I think of how I lost it all
and maybe I'll come down crying instead of falling and dieing.

Why couldn't God just love me?
All my life I just wanted to know
How and why I lost it all
Am I not good enough for you God?
Couldn't you have mercy on me?
or will peace leave me
So now I sit in my bed sleepless
with my slit wrist cutting away
Hoping for a brighter day
Listen to me crying now,
as the hot tears stream down,
Everything shatters within
and now everything spins
I sit in my bed sleepless
Why couldn't god just love me?
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PostPosted: Mon May 28, 2007 5:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

although your a nOOb, your poems are not bad. Depressing, *shivers* but not bad.
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PostPosted: Mon May 28, 2007 5:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you, Im glad you liked them.
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PostPosted: Tue May 29, 2007 5:51 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

i liked them. Smile
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PostPosted: Tue May 29, 2007 11:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Heres another poem, it's kind of long-
She Cries
She cries
All alone in the dark
She cries
In the Blackness of her soul
She cries
The doors are Bolted shut and
She cries
The window sealed with magic
She cries
With blood red tears,
She cries
A sickly pale reflection in a foggy mirror-
She cries
This is her;
She cries
This is what she became
She cries
The aftereffects of her loneliness
She cries
This is how she dies
She cries
with dull eye's staring
She cries
At a blood coated razor
She cries
And blood pouring from her slit wrists-
She cries
A mix of Red and Black
She cries
Demon!
She cries
Freak!
She cries
Abomination!
She cries
Pathetic!
She cries
She was a fool
She cries
To believe she wouldn't die alone
She cries
A bitter broken laugh escapes
She cries
''I truly am worthless''
She cries
One last sigh,
She cries
Her eye's slowly flicker shut
She cries...
She is dead
She cries
All alone, she cries!
She was always crying!
No one noticed!
And this is where her crying led-
Her cold lifeless body
in a pool of her own blood...
A girl
Dark
and alone
and now...dead.

'She cried...and she could cry no more- For there was nothing left to cry for, she ended her sorrow...by ending her life.


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PostPosted: Tue May 29, 2007 12:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

O.o

erm... depressing. again, it was good, but even more depressing than the last one.

ArE yOu OkAy??
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PostPosted: Thu May 31, 2007 3:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Here's another poem..
Why?
Why
Why does everyone hate?
Why
Why does everyone fight?
What is the point?
Fighting can't help
It can't help me
Not you
Not anybody
Why
Why do people argue?
It only leads to problems
Losing friends
Loss of self
of mind
of soul
of spirit
But then is not life...
A place where you lose everything
That you cared
everything you shared
You lose everything you love
everything you hold dear
and,sadly
you will eventually lose something important
So important you never knew
You will lose you...
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PostPosted: Thu May 31, 2007 4:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

1, both poems where good
2, I'm glad you stopped talking in [b]bold[/b]
3, I want to know if anything's wrong, kay? Or if you're just writing like this for fun?
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PostPosted: Thu May 31, 2007 4:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="NicholasDWolfwood"]1, both poems where good
2, I'm glad you stopped talking in [b]bold[/b]
3, I want to know if anything's wrong, kay? Or if you're just writing like this for fun?[/quote]

Word.
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 11:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Im just writing this for fun.
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 11:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yah, I love depressing poetry. You'rea better poet than me I know that.
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 11:23 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks.^^[/b]
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 11:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yah, your agood poet. Why not try in teh art section of teh site? youd getalot of teh comments. Very Happy
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 9:12 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Lost:
A loner in the dark
Searching for a clue
Doesen't know where she is
Doesen't know what to do
Walking in the hallway
Looking for her long lost dreams
Feeling blindly every where
But suddenly hears a scream
She rushes to the sound
But just finds a light-filled room
With bloody writings on the wall
that warned her of her doom
As she left the bedroom
She found herself in her childhood home
Where her whole family was murdered
And she was the serviver, all alone
She went back in the room
disappointed with what she found
Her parent's lifeless bodies
were left to bleed on the ground
Her eye's swelled up with tears
As her knees fell to the floor
She was lost in her surroundings
This was not her home anymore
It was a house of dead people
Exactly like a grave
She noticed something in her pocket
It was a blood, covered blade
Her eye's widened in shock
As tears fell down from her eye's
She killed her whole family
She screamed out loud in her surprise
She gazed at the blade in her hand
While staring at it she cried
She stabbed herself in the heart
She has commited suicide
But what she saw was a nightmare
A nightmare of her past
She killed herself in her sleep
Her good luck didn't last
She escaped her fault before
But remember the writing in the room
The bloody writings on the wall
that warned her of her doom
She regretted what she did
Yet she still told a lie
Now her mind played a trick on her
That made her bleed, and die
Until this very day
In the house you still hear cries
The cries of the girl
and her family that have died
'' In that house
stays a lonely ghost
The spirit of that girl
that will be forever lost...

Try looking at it this way: The girl in this poem, and the family that died in this poem are her friends. She betrayed them, she was lying to them all along, and she escaped her fault once but at the second time she died trying to save them; that's when the girl committed suicide. She stabbed them in the back with her hidden blade, which made the trust in them die. But even if she sacrificed herself for them, the trust that died in her friends will never come back again. That's why you can still hear cries, because they were hurt by someone they thought was there friend, and she still cries because she had alot of regrets, and no matter how many times she say's sorry, the trust can never be regained. She hurt them and killed the trust inside them, Karma found it's way back to her; thats why she remains a lost ghost...Well if you don't understand this, just to let you no the moral of this poem is: ''If you do bad things to people, it will allways come back to you - In other words...''Karma''...
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 10:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay, as long as your not deppresed.
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 05, 2007 5:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Love:
Love is a feeling
It can make you do stupid things
Love can make you look like a fool
You can be played with, like a puppet with strings
To others, love is wonderful
But love can spell disaster for you and I
You can easily get your heart broken
And you will be left alone, to cry
Love can cause the wounds
That time itself may never heal
Love can stab you in the back
Love can slowly kill
So a warning to those who love someone
Be careful; be cautious, in the desisions that you make
Because one wrong move, one big mistake
Could soon lead to your heart beginning to break...
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 08, 2007 4:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Undying love:
The truth or just lies
An enemy or a friend
An angle or a demon
A biginning or an end
I want to know why
Why you betrayed us that day
We treated you as a friend
yet you just ran away
They thought you were kind
Turns out you were untrue
You were lying;you were decieving us
What has happened to you? Crying or Very sad
The first day you came
you were like the girl next door
Pretty, kind, and caring
We coulden't ask for more
We quickly befriended you
I easily fell in love
Your radiance blinded my eyes
As if you were sent from high above
But when you ran away
That radiance began to fade
It disappeared out of thin air
When your betrayal has been made...
Now you're like a fallen angel
A girl left alone
Once your heart was golden
Is now just a heart turned into stone
I know that you had alot of regrets
Bu the past cannot be changed
You should've made the right decisions
But instead you made mistakes
I understand that you saved us
That was one of the kindest things you've done
But you destroyed the trust inside us
Though my trust for you was never gone
I know these words are painful;I'm sorry
but you have caused me so much pain
just the thought of you betraying us
made me go insane
So, now here we stand
right infront of your grave
Honoring you as a true friend
If only your life were saved:
I would look into your eyes
Telling you more than mere words could say
''I'll always love you and forever will''
But now you have passed away...
All thats left now is your body
Your soul has disappered
But when you saved our lifes today
The radiance then appeared
The same light I saw when I first met you
The same glow when you were alive
Right now, the truth is, I wish you were still here
I just wished that you never died Sad ...
But even if you're gone, I'm happy for you
Because you're still going to watch me from above
These words Im saying are for you; I hope you can here me
This is a sign of my undying love...
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 11:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Left behind:
Alone in my room
Tears flowing from my eye's
Shaking in a corner
Trying to stop my cries
Whimpering and wondering
Why your life had to end
You were my love, my life
You were one of my best friends
Well, life really is fragile
It makes you wonder why
God made human beings so delicate
Why humans easily die
But thats just the way life is
Every beggining has an end
No matter how hard it is to accept
No matter how hard it is to understand...
For now, I'll just have to be strong
Though you'll always be in my mind
But instead of me being happy for you
I can't help but feel like I was left behind...
(yeah...I know it was short but I guess I was just not in the make-a-decent-poem-that-people-will-like mood... Oh well, I know it's not good but I just posted it anyway... hope it isen't bad as I think it is...I might regret posting this...Oh, well...)
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