In The Shadows: The battle will be fought in your heart

[power9x]

Well, I wrote it a while ago, but I'm new to the fourms here, so here's the critique:

PG-13 Version
Content Ratings:
Moderate: Violence, Nudity, Language
Mild: Sexual Content
URL: http://www.fanart-central.net/story-46661.html
R Version
Content Ratings:
Moderate: Sexual Content
Explicit: Violence, Nudity, Language
URL: http://www.fanart-central.net/story-45388.html
Unrated Version
Content Ratings:
Explicit: Violence, Sexual Content, Nudity, Language
URL: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3524248/1/

Name: In The Shadows
Universe: My Life As A Teenage Robot/Shadow Souls(Alt Universe of the MLAATR universe, some variants to the normal, my personal universe for my MLAATR fanfics. Also a non-mlaatr universe within itself, so technically, it isn't the same universe.)
Parings: JennyxBrad, JennyxSheldon, OC Parings (AdamxAshley)
Summary: In the future, humanity has evolved. Generating 2 minds within one body, a seperate soul being within each child, a new breed has been born. Though, through years of suffering, the first of it's kind has transformed into a supernatural being of unlimited power, generated from his mind. Though, his own past follows him as he drags in several MLAATR characters into a deadly game aganist a man that has lost his own path to darkness, and in turn, the fate of the world is in the mind of one robotic teenage girl named Jenny Wakeman. Though this time, revenge over a lost friend may lead to the darkness...
Version Changes: All versions are edits of the original text, no version is a pure original. The changes are the most drastic in the PG-13 version, with some scenes rewritten and changed. The R and Uncensored version only differ in 2 scenes, one being ommitted for content here (I.E: Lemon), and one scene being rewritten so that it just lowers it enough from explicit sexual content to moderate. That's all. Thanks in advance.