Lands In Absence. My Fantasy Fic.

[Shadowwave]

[color=red]Title[/color]: Lands in Absence (Actually Untitled at the moment though)
[color=red]Genre[/color]: Fantasy, Fictional
[color=red]Author[/color]: Eduan Muller (Shadowwave or ShadWickBrand)
[color=red]Chapters[/color]: 4 (at the moment)
[color=red]Favourite Chapter[/color]: 4 - Suspicions With Beer (at the moment)
[color=red]Satus[/color]: Incomplete
[color=red]Main Chars[/color]: Chrestos and Archon.
[color=red]Important Chars[/color]: Lohg, Limos, Bucatar, Tachus, Fafnir.
[color=red]Link[/color]: [url]http://www.fanart-central.net/story-45454.html[/url]

Heya! This is my Fatasy Fic I started wrighting last year.
I was hoping some of you guys could check it out for me and tell me what you think, perhaps a tip or two.
Please tell me your fave parts and also the parts you didn't like.
I would really appreciate some comments, if you have the time.
Thanx!
-Shadowwave
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